So this is clear at its beginning stages still, but something is wrong. I've been debating If I should just stop, or finishing coloring it 'just because' (Although I'm pretty sure Coloring it will only make it look more done... but not necessarily better)
So I was hoping if anyone could give some advice, (so I can fix it now, while I still don't mind reworking the foundation.)
The knights (that are still fighting) I'm eventually going have them sorta fading out.
Also the white scribble on the left hand side, that's more of a 'white light goes here' mental note
I think theirs something up with the right arm of the focus point knight. I used a reference but still somethings wrong. maybe the perspective?