WIP i've dones something wrong but I'm not sure what

[Brhombus]

So this is clear at its beginning stages still, but something is wrong. I've been debating If I should just stop, or finishing coloring it 'just because' (Although I'm pretty sure Coloring it will only make it look more done... but not necessarily better)

So I was hoping if anyone could give some advice, (so I can fix it now, while I still don't mind reworking the foundation.)

The knights (that are still fighting) I'm eventually going have them sorta fading out.
Also the white scribble on the left hand side, that's more of a 'white light goes here' mental note




I think theirs something up with the right arm of the focus point knight. I used a reference but still somethings wrong. maybe the perspective?

please help

[DAMJAN]

so this is suppose to be a fight around the focal point? If that's the case, first establish your horizon line, draw perspectives and go from there. Those ppl on left fighting are huge compared to others

[LordLouis]

Yeah I think you should stop coloring at this stage.
It looks very random at the moment and you should explore various possibilities of displaying the scene. Also, the guy and the girl on the right seem to suggest.. well, not an epic fight shall we say.

[vardoburrito]

Keep doing those perspective studies. It's taking me ages too, but there's no other way.

I would drop some links, but I'm rebuilding my bookmarks atm. There's plenty of references in this forum, but I can't bloody find them.