I never draw any human before, so I wanna try it out. I expect it to be bleak and bland because this is my first try. The objective of the drawing is rather I just want to practice some cartoon anatomy and trying to make the next drawing look better than this by pointing out the bad factors.
The image is here: http://attachments.conceptart.org/fo...1&d=1320823714.
So I want some advices on some points I've marked on the image:
A: drawing hands is problematic for me. The fingers and how the hand is drawn - it does not look good. I draw hands by taking a photo of someone's hand and try to "imitate" it. Sometimes, I found that I put too much details which contradict with the rest of the image. I'm still not sure about drawing a proper hand in this context here.
B: I see that the legs of both characters are not interesting. It's... how should I put it? There is nothing mentionable. What are some of the lines and strokes should I apply here to make them more noticeable?
C: I am trying to draw a ponytail hair that has the tail wrapped to the front, but I am not sure about the stroke around her head. What do you think?
D: What are some of the things we can improve to make her face? And possibly, what are some of the more things we can add?
I am looking for criticism here, so I can improve. Please criticize me and roll in all the comments, thank you.