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    Catwoman :3

    Hey guys ^_^ this is my first post ever on here (so... please take it easy on me if I totally screw up something )

    This is one of my friends who decided to dress up as a cat for upcoming Halloween. I thought it was cute, so I tried to paint her pose. Please tell me what you guys think(serious Criticism WANTED!!!!), as im trying to get better/ learn more skills so I can get into college :/

    OHHH and 1 more thing:

    Um.. Well this is my 2nd attempt at digital painting, I used Painter 12, and also Photoshop. Total time: Around 14-15 hours... I know long time
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    Not bad looks like a blurred foto, or a foto done by a bad cellphone camera. Realism is hard to pull of and you did it

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    Thank you ^_^ I did in fact blur it alot :/ I know its not the best thing to do, but it covers up mistakes I made lol.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ChocolateRainLolita View Post
    Thank you ^_^ I did in fact blur it alot :/ I know its not the best thing to do, but it covers up mistakes I made lol.
    This is not a good thing to do. Fix your mistakes and learn from them instead of making me think I needed glasses just because I looked at your image. It's so blurry and out of focus it is not pleasurable to look at... at all.
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    Thx for that, I understand what you mean... Let me upload the version before I applied "blinding blur lol"... Remember this was still the rough version.
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    I'd suggest posting stuff like this in the 'WIP and Critique' section - especially if you want lots of advice on what to change and how to make it better.

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    ya definately need to fix that nose and neck.

    as for the hair , ya need to keep it alot less blurry

    add some values to the fur

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    so cute love the face hope you post some more !!

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    Your non-blurred version is a LOT better. *thumbs-up*

    I'm one of those weirdos that actually likes to see brush strokes in a painting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Saramel View Post
    I'd suggest posting stuff like this in the 'WIP and Critique' section - especially if you want lots of advice on what to change and how to make it better.
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    the nose and the neck dosn`t look right and the distance between the mouth and the nose is large it need to be fixed

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