Ok Coral

[RangerX]

this is one I'm working on ,need input on the right hand corner what would you put there. or would you leave it as is, I'm about half way at this point , the right corner has a small amount of sky clouds for now

Thanks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K70Sai3v3aw

[TinyBird]

All your horses seem to have really tiny heads or really bloated bodies. The legs seem to bend in the wrong places (like the one circled is bending from way too high) and the colours/values fail to show any form. Like if you compare the muscles in the right side (of the image) front legs in the painting and the photo, in your painting it looks like there's just couple white lines and not that there would be actual muscles there.

[RangerX]

All your horses seem to have really tiny heads or really bloated bodies. The legs seem to bend in the wrong places (like the one circled is bending from way too high) and the colours/values fail to show any form. Like if you compare the muscles in the right side (of the image) front legs in the painting and the photo, in your painting it looks like there's just couple white lines and not that there would be actual muscles there.

thanks for the input still working on the horses

how about the right hand corner

[TinyBird]

how about the right hand corner

Not my painting so I'm not going to go saying what you should put there. The horizon does suffer from the "end of the world" look so I'd put something there that tells that the world is going on. But you should have figured this out in the composition thumbnails, not when the image is half-finished.

[RangerX]

Not my painting so I'm not going to go saying what you should put there. The horizon does suffer from the "end of the world" look so I'd put something there that tells that the world is going on. But you should have figured this out in the composition thumbnails, not when the image is half-finished.

your right but a time I thought it would show motion for the horses, only now doesn't feel right
thanks again