Under Construction Page Image

[kidcrucial]

The title says it all but this is for my website to tell people to come back later. As for the image itself, I'd love to hear any feedback as I really stink at coloring my drawings. Thanks.

[Sems]

I really like this, why is his neck hovering though? nice touch, really nice I dunno why you say you cant colour

[kidcrucial]

Thanks Sems. About the neck- for some reason I decided to omit it and have a floating head. To help sell this and not lead people to think I forgot it, I think it would look better if it were repositioned in front of his right arm some more. That might also sell some depth.

[Woop Shotty]

Please change the font. Do it for me!

[kidcrucial]

This coming from a guy who used primary colors on his site?
Just kidding, but I'm kind of feeling the Arial. Thanks.

[ArtisticSchmidt]

I like it too. To emphasize the "no neck/ floating head" I think you should put a slight cast shadow on his chest. And moving it down a smidgeon would help also. Nice splatters...

[thetoastman]

I like it too. To emphasize the "no neck/ floating head" I think you should put a slight cast shadow on his chest. And moving it down a smidgeon would help also. Nice splatters...

I agree, it appears to be resting on his sleeve at the moment. I like the flow of the piece, though.

[ElvisMcVegas]

Its a little too stylized for my tastes, but I dont really see what it has to do with a page being under construction

[sailormoon]

that was a good pick.. a good style for a page being renovated and repainted. but images should depend upon the site..