Hi there! Thanks for the comment on my sketchbook ^^
I really like your art, some of it's just so cute! I don't see much to critique, but I think some of your drawings are a little too detailed? It kind of loses depth that way. In your picture with the two wolves/dogs, for example, some parts like the tails and the mushrooms are so well-focused and clear that they're a little distracting and almost look like they float out of the picture! I like what you did with the pictures of the two girls because their hair becomes fuzzy and less focused behind their heads. It's like a camera.. the most detailed part should be the focal point!
Your coloring is lovely, though. Keep up the good work! ^^