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[Aonegamer]

Hi Guys,
Below are some of my latest artwork.
Please, please ,please comment.

as only when someone comment, one is going to learn.
Awaiting response.

[Aonegamer]

Check this:

[Aonegamer]

One more work

[Aonegamer]

need more finishing. I should only concentrate for time being on Character design. Complete environment is hard and takes time, pheeewwww.....

[n1frit]

I understand that your mind full of idaes) But will be better start with more simplest objects. Draw them correctly. And the move to something more insane. Studying of anatomy, prospect and simple illumination this that that is necessary. I always come back to bases and I repeat them.

[Aonegamer]

Hi N1 Frit,

Thanks for your reply.
Yeah i have started focusing on Character designing keeping anatomy as my primary focus.

[Aonegamer]

Hi all, one more concept art.
Inspiration Iron man. Or peel off Arnold's skin (terminator) LOL.

[Aonegamer]

Do not mess with this nigga

[Aonegamer]

One of my age old work:

[Aonegamer]

Hi all , one more art:

Please please comment

[takashmen]

I understand that your mind full of idaes) But will be better start with more simplest objects. Draw them correctly. And the move to something more insane. Studying of anatomy, prospect and simple illumination this that that is necessary. I always come back to bases and I repeat them.

you want comment, read carefully what n1frit wrote

so leave your "character design" and focus on basics,

1. buy loomis, hampton or bringdam - start gaining theoretical knowledge of anatomy
2. practice figures (gesture) life (if possible) or from references
http://lovecastle.org/draw/
3. do photo and screen caps studies and also still lives
4. leave imagination epic painting for a while.

cheers

[Aonegamer]

All right Gotcha.

You and n1frit are correct, I would practice from real life photos , that would let me learn anatomy and coloring basics, and until i master them i should probably postpone further fantasy drawing.

[Aonegamer]

One more concept art,Used John Cena as reference.
And yeah, I am doin practice for anatomy a lot, but for coloring I guess I should continue what i used to do.

[Aonegamer]

Color seems to be fade, I don't know I use saturated colors still it is seeing as faded , any advice from any one ?

[Aonegamer]

Cenation

[Aonegamer]

Now what u all say for this ???

[Aonegamer]

U cant see ? U cant see me

[vinknight]

start out with basic shapes, it will help out quite alot. I'm not very good at drawing too but that's some advice my teacher gave me

[Aonegamer]

start out with basic shapes, it will help out quite alot. I'm not very good at drawing too but that's some advice my teacher gave me

Yeah I think I am good at basic.(or I must say i m working on my basic side by side).
I need advice where am I lacking in the above arts ??
I make a picture, people advice me for for basic. No issue with that , but please consider my situation:

1.I am working on basic with pen and pencil on paper. I don't fill posting that here as its not ones work, its just practice.
2. After practicing a lot when I get bored I draw some stuff like the above arts. To check My skills.

And all I get as advice is keep practice (Let me tell u I am practicing, and have and will to practice through my life I understand that ) i want advice on my above paintings, where am i lagging in them ??????

Any suggestions for them ???

[Aonegamer]

so whats wrong with this ?

[zerdron]

I think you lack the proportion in your drawings.

[Aonegamer]

I think you lack the proportion in your drawings.

OK. In which one ? the warrior girl I guess ?

[Aonegamer]

two more work:

[Aonegamer]

This is actually not my creation.
I seen a painting online, then I desaturated it and then colored it to learn the skin tones.
I have no intention of copyright theft.
This is jut to study skin tones.

[Aonegamer]

Testing my signature

[Aonegamer]

One more art

[Xelar]

Tbh I think photoshop is not the tool for you at this point.
Get a pencil and a sketchbook and do LOADS of studies and sketches.
You need the basics before you tackle more complicated images

[Aonegamer]

All right again my reply is :

I am working a lot with pencil and paper.
But once the sketch is finished I cannot resist myself without coloring it.
I need advice where am I lacking in the above arts ??
I make a picture, people advice me for for basic. No issue with that , but please consider my situation:

1.I am working on basic with pen and pencil on paper. I don't fill posting that here as its not ones work, its just practice.
2. After practicing a lot when I get bored I draw some stuff like the above arts. To check My skills.

And all I get as advice is keep practice (Let me tell u I am practicing, and have and will to practice through my life I understand that ) i want advice on my above paintings, where am i lagging in them ??????

mean while justify this one:

[Aonegamer]

2 more art:

[Aonegamer]

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