i know all that stuff already, but when you are drawing with a vine charcoal stick, an alive human being that moves every now and then, and time limit, you kinda start feeling the pressure on you, haha, not trying to make xcuses here, just sayin, this is new to me, and its challenging, next week, since well get a week break from school, ill make some really elaborated figures, talking my time, and thinking on every little proportional detail. : DStudy and memorize how the various lengths of the figure relate to each other (how many heads long the torso is and so on) to help you.
on the value critic, yeah, you are very right, hehe, im gonna work on that, my figure drawing teacher is a bad ass at drawing, but his teaching ways aren't the best, but yeah, values is something i plan to deal with on my following figure drawings
Feet are a bitch haha, but i shall tackle them.
Thank you so much for the critic, i really appreciate it