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    Red face <3 Mein Bunker <3

    Hello!
    I was viewing galleries here for some time and decided to show my drawings. Im 15 and don't speak english very well but I want Your honest opinion, tips and suggestions because I really want to improve. All your comments will be very appreciated!
    Im posting here few sketches + illustrations, from earlier (about 3 months) to recent. Some of them are kind of lame (hm, very lame) but im too lazy to make sketchdump only of the best. Also feel free to comment my DA where i have much more stuff.
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    Hey thanks for stopping by my sketchbook!!

    So far as suggestions go, I'd say looking at where you want to be and backtracking, I myself would love to be able to draw convincing people and environments, huge epic illustrations pretty much lol, so I'm starting with anatomy studies and building from there. I'd tell you to try something similar. Apart from that lots of hard work, don't worry about your art not looking great thats what sketchbooks are for. The sooner you hear where you may be going wrong the sooner you can concentrate on it and squish that problem. It's great you found CA early, its a really amazing environment to grow as an artist. Best of luck and keep on drawing
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    Hey, just had a look through your deviantart, some really awesome stuff you have.
    I see you got a nice illustrative style developing, and you have some really interesting concepts.

    I'd keep up the studies so that what you learn will improve your imaginitive works, particularly anatomy studies.
    You can look for Loomis's books too.(Sorry if you already know about them xD)
    http://www.scribd.com/doc/255814/And...Figure-Drawing
    http://www.scribd.com/doc/501782/And...Head-and-Hands

    They're all in english I'm afraid, but you'll most definitely still get some use out of them. Keep up the good work, mate!
    Take a look? - Sketchbook -

    Also, why not check these guys too?
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    Hello, i forgot about this topic. Thank You for kind comments yeah i know Loomis, but i should use his books more.
    I was playing with ink and made about 15 pages of crap, also my hands sketchbook reached 20 filled pages. Here are two speed inkz, ruskies from photo drawn poorly and in hurry and little illustration



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    Great job on that image of the soviet revolution. Now give us more !

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    hello
    recently i had tons of work but now i won contest and only thing torturing me are my grades. I drew some ideas lurking in my head, for my own pleasure




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    I like the drawing of the house. What contest did you win? ^^

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    even the starry sky is impressive!
    And congrats on winning the contest!

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    Nice stuff, especially the last piece and the one with all the geometry sticking into the orifices of the head/face.
    SB. p31 updated 25.04.2012.

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    Thank You so much folks!!!

    Sushy hmm what i can say, that was about "presenting collection". I wouldn't call my work good but mindless effort i've put in it was even impressing. But I didn't take the pictures

    Now I'm working on comission (A2), I bet you saw dat face somewhere
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    Great stuff for a start Portrait looks great , maybe more deepth needed ( ear to close to eyes ) but it may be that angle is such.
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    Hello, I forgot about few sketches, mainly from my trip to museum+graveyard and playing with new pens while lying in bed (yup i see its crooked).
    PS tell me if two pics are too wide



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    Hey, haven't had time to reply back this week! I'll fix that now.

    Nice idea with using a calendar, it actually looks pretty cool with the ink lines. I especially like the inked shoes - they look very professional. Not much advice or help I can give at the moment, so just keep working, that's what always helps . Looking good!

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    The portrait in #10 looks great!

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    Thanks for stopping by my book, very nice work on your Stalin - it's good to see you are not afraid to use extreme dark shades. Using that range of value is what makes an image pop. Keep it up man

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    Saara_ professional haha You're very kind
    ranunkel thanks!
    FUSHANDCHUPS you're welcome and thanks

    My schooltime is almost over so i'm going to draw like mad. Recently I've done these inks for my cup (instead of learning history eheh) and every time I look at it I wanna have fun with these guys :B


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    Those figures on your cup look very funny
    And it is nice to see you draw in your school diary. I especially like the sketches of shoes.

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    Your work is very charming!
    I especially love the sketches and doodles in the page for 29-30 of May.

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    Thanks!
    Here is sketch for mastercopy but i realized reference is too small. Also portrait, not very well but i don't hate it.
    btw i made new DA account for fresh stuff but now i don't really wanna move, it's too much fuss about nothing... What do You think?


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    Well moving to DA depends I guess - I've considering moving away as CA.org is a bit clogged interface wise but but then I would have to rebuild some there and well.

    I rather stick here for now.

    As for your latest pieces they look good - might be something with the eyes of Stalin.
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    Not bad/not bad.
    Interesting sketches.
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    I've been lurking on your sketchbook from time to time and I really have no crits yet. You're drawing and trying out interesting things (like those drawings in the cup) along with the odd bit of realism.

    So, nothing to say really other than keep up the good work!
    Take a look? - Sketchbook -

    Also, why not check these guys too?
    Krysjez - Plissken - Clur
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    dan liimatta, oh yeah, eyes aren't good but after flipping it horizontally that's not the biggest problem... Seriously, from now I won't forget about using mirror, i don't wanna see nightmare like that again :P
    Naidy, LtPlissken, thank You! <3

    Pixelz from teen challenge&another cup; I'm doing more but don't really want to show things i don't like, also scanning and uploading is time-consuming. Nice pictures coming soon.



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    15? Good Lord...

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    That pixel thing looks quite cool. I like those crystals.

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    I'm quite busy but still drawing


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    Good to know that you are still drawing.
    Otherwise I would send Mel Gibson to your house.
    Now.... it would be time for some updates, you did
    not posted anything for a month.
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    i'd second that opinion. There's some intriguing material in here.

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    I do love your sketchbook title
    The stalin portrait is really creepy, but maybe that is because I have simply learnt too much about soviet russia. I love the trees, they are veery good- keep it up with the lines, lovely!

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    great stuff, you have a nice skills for a 15 yr old, that portrait is looking vert nice
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