Hello Durrell! Fine ink and wash figures you have on your second page, i really like them! The atmosphere they have is really nice. Also, thank you for posting the steps for that cast shadow study. The sketching and the rendering is nice to observe. However, i like the step before the final step more. It has atmosphere and better depth than the last one. Why?-Because I think the last would need more hard edges. As it is, it looks like you tried blending in some parts, and didn't came out to well. That is just how i read it.
Nice job with the tones though!
On the first page i see a lot of pencil work, really nice! You have strong, confident linework. I really like it. I consider them to be far superior to your digital stuff as it is now. Some of the images were really small. You can make them a lot larger, it won't matter! Each sketchbook page has 30 posts, and it doesn't matter how many or how big images you upload. But on the other hand, it would be better to see the drawings larger. Let us appreciate your work properly!
Also, thank you for your visit in my sketch book. I'll be sure to take one still life at a time. I want to do them properly. I also see you have started a sketch of a still life. Is it from life? Perhaps we shall do it parallel, and we can give crit on each other.
Keep posting and keep putting pencil to paper!






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