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    Thanks guys. Some doodle and quick live drawings;





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    alper son desenler cok rahat beğendim onlari. tonlamada biraz aksama var gibi, cizgilerini hacme göre yönlendirmeye calis tonlarken. ne yaptin bu arada sinavlara giricekmisin yada okuyor musun?

    please visit my page and help me.
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    The animations are rad. The anatomy studies are looking good; if you can get your hands on one, I'd recommend throwing some studies from one of Gottfried Bammes' books into the mix (Der Nackte Mensch is his best, imo). His stuff is very focused on geometry; his figures are almost architecture, which I think would make a great counterbalance to Bridgman's loose, gestural stuff. Some of your figures are losing that overall structure that Bammes is so heavy on; I think you're getting so focused on anatomy that you're paying more attention to the muscles than the figure as a whole, and some of your figures are getting disproportionate and slightly rubber-feeling as a result. Which I think almost everyone does, occasionally, but it's something to be aware of, and something Bammes would be a good cure for, perhaps.

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    jcpahl; Thank you so much for critiques...

    Some studies of last 3 months, i used references for figures;

















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    Thumbnail;



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    Thumbnail;


    Refed figure;

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    Thumbnail;



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    Thumbnails;



    Fat, bald but happy;

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    Some tone;


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    Hey man, great studies ^_^ My only crit is with the figures, try not to go so bubbly with them. When you push that kind of look it can sort of edge into the real of the...uhm...grotesque...like that last dude. I mean if that's what you're going for super...and sorry dude I don't mean to harp on you...or knock down the way you draw or anything...I really hope it didn't come across like that, sorry if it did.

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    Man, i really understand what did you mean. I'm a little bit on the animation way, maybe for this reason my some studies are simply and bubbly , but you are right same time i should do realistic things. Thanks for the crit, you can be relax, EVERY CRİTİQUES ARE WELCOME

    Some new doodles;



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    Definitly an improvement over the pages. Also cool animation.
    But pls scan ur linework reasonable .

    greetings

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    Thanks Lakai, i have a4 scanner but i usually study bigger than.






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    Those are from summer;

    Digital doodling;



    Speed selfportrait;



    Referenced studies, i tried different brushes at first;







    From last months;

    Sketches;









    From books, pics;
















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