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[shiNIN]

I think firewall means a wall of fire only and the vampire face is much weaker than everything else, except than this, cool
I love the animals, frostbolt and slow the most.

[Kungfoowiz]

Hey bro =)

Mmm.. I like them, the new icons are a definite improvement. The little drawings of the animals in particular are very appealing imho. All the icons are more effective. =)

Have fun with your next piece.. =)

[zien]

Love the four horsemen bro!

lookin good.

[LtPlissken]

I forgot something to tell you about the concepts in #81
and #85; the font part, the 'Project FPTD' and the "Hell
Entertainment' fonts are overemphasized, and they are
overwhelming the image content. The main purpose of these
paintings are to present your concept and not to make a
company advertisement. The best way to see what I am talking
about is to see some Fallout 3 released concept art paintings on
the net. http://www.google.com/images?hl=en&s...qi=g1&aql=&oq=
There is written Fallout on all of them but, with small fonts on the bottom
part of the image. Hope this advice helps you promoting your next concepts
on a better way.
#90 - Interesting, you did the job definitely great, these book pages
remind me on Heroes of Might and Magic spellbooks.

[devastacio]

Hey there, always loved RPG games. i have enjoyed(wasted) long hours of such games

Nice icons mate. Only the 'Lighting bolt' icon is the one that i dislike. its too complicated for an icon, if you ask my opinion on it.

Anyways, i still didn't check you game (Project FPTD) ill be trying it out on this Sunday. Also, do you have a demo link for this game as well?

Kep up the good work mate. lets see some more stuff

[Sivonja]

@ shiNIN ofcourse that means wall of fire , do u relay think then when player casts poison that u will seen some scoprions or dead rats for plaque. Anyway tnx for critics.

@ Kungfoowiz tnankx bro i am glad u like them

@ zien Thanks for stopping in my SB ,and i ma glad u like them , i will visit u soon in your SB ,cya soon

@ LtPlissken tnx Mr.Snake , i know for that i just not have anything for background so it's empty and that fonts is a little decorative, thats reason why is too big , to fill some empty space nothing else

@ devastacio thanks for comment , i love RPG games too ,but unfotunately i not have time to play them anymore , Project FPTD is in wip so link what i share there is for demo 0.2 version , u can also dowload and try 0.1 version to see difference.


Today i bring u some doodles , enjoy

[shiNIN]

No but a brick wall with fire on top looked a bit funny to me while scorpions and rats don't. Maybe it has a factot that he fact the first thing went too close to the actual thing with a strange element while the animals were obviously symbolic. *shrugs* I just wrote my opinion - and now I had to reply, I wouldn't have bothered your sb otherwise.
{btw I drew a shiny for you in my sb but maybe it doesn't matter anymore}

Funny robots by the way.

[LtPlissken]

Hey buddy, Robotz doodlez are totally great.
Sharpening your creativity ain't ya?
That's the way things should get done.
Try to do imaginaries as often as you can,
they are a real markable indication of your improvements.

[devastacio]

Hey there,

Super cool robot designs. Your lines are really neat, even in the doodles. totally opposite of mine I have no crits for now mate.

Well lets see some more work of yours

[Sivonja]

@ all thanks for commnets ,
Here is some old sketches from past , first and second is study for one Oil what i never made ....i called it "Lost Kingdom" unfortunately i not painted that , idea is to paint king who lost his kingdom, last sketch is one of my oldest sketch from 1995 and it presents The Famous Winged Bulls from the Palace of Sargon II at Khorsabad.

[shiNIN]

Nice idea... The bottom part of the king's clothes seems flat to me and I'd paint his crown that's his power's symbol, laying in the floor and I definitely made him taller than 4.5-5 heads.

I don't know what reference you used for the winged bulls but its legs aren't so great. The upper half is much better.
And I don't know if my words has any use, they are old drawings and maybe you know what their problem but still i said them My unfiltered thoughts.

I'm looking forward to your new shinies You totally spoiled us lately.

[Kungfoowiz]

Hey bro, these are coooool! The patterns and designs you put into your things are amazing.. you are very good at these. =)

You developed the sketch from a while back a lot nicer now. There are some things wrong though. Most noticeable being his legs, they maybe need to be longer. At least twice the length of his torso (measuring from the underneath of the crotch).

Keep up the good work bro, you are doing GREAT! Have fun! =)

[LtPlissken]

Some proportion issues with the king indeed,
the others already pointed out the main things.
But as shiNIN said, these drawings are old and there is
no need for harsh critics or anything else, because you
have already improved since then. So hope that you will
post something new and exciting.
Keep your engines warm.

[devastacio]

hey there,

Nice sketches mate, especially the last piece is great. it looks so rich with details. I think all the flaws are pointed out already. The values look too even in the second piece. but as snake said, these stuff are old right? so no worries

Lets see some more stuff

[Sivonja]

@shiNIN thats statue is on entrance and it;s not fully sculpted ...its more relief than sculpture , so i haved some of that kind reference, tnx for comment

@Kungfoowiz tnx bro ,and for ShiNIN same answer , i started with head and later i notice that my SB is too small for normal sketch so i resized him a little

@LtPlissken tnx m8 , yeah ,well thats past ,and yeah too many erors ,but one thing is not bad ,and that's idea and i still ahve time to make it again

@devastacio tnx for comment my friend ,cya soon


Now it is time to finaly show u my avatar ....it's main character of Project FPTD called Jack , for start i created head , then i add him body , and later i use that to make poster (A0 format) also main screen in game is with that motive

And i wish to say thanks to those persons who voted for my artwork on prewious CHOW : 4 horsemens of Apocalipse, thanks for BIG support :devastacio, kiwigarbage, larchist, LtPlissken, maria riaz, reginanegra, i realy appreciate that and in future u have my vote

[shiNIN]

LOL!
I can't find words but I'm glad I get to know about him a bit more than your avatar alone and it's an epic lol, really. I received a big smile glued into my face for tonight.
He's so tly a character, with that expression and manly chin

[LtPlissken]

Quickly delete these last images, before someone sues you for
molesting animals. Hahaha, just joking. Poor pig. Pooooor ol' pig,
I can see the suffering in his hairy eyes. And the chicken is still
alive. The chicken will rape the pig now.
I have told you that you have improved a million times since
the year 2000/2001. You have surprised me definitely with
this painting and with this charismatic character. I was actually
looking for this style, for my comic books. This outlined style.
Did you painted the outlines with a basic brush?
Nitpicking; the background turrets are detailed much more
than the foreground character, and it has a much realistic look
than the character, which I think that should not be the case.

Overall, my impression is that this work is a
hard core powerage. I feel happy about you.

[Sivonja]

He he thanks for commnents , that character was maded to look funny and i guess i made it ,btw Mr. Snake fell free to use him in your comics , i painted him with basic brushes and i rendered him with basic brushes ,in that time i not know too much of digital painting , and background turrets is 3d models ...i not tell u that ...here comes second character : Professor Klang ,mastermind of Project FPTD

[shiNIN]

I didn't comment the presentation last time but now the letters are way too close to his hair... It's disturbing.
The body is extremely messy, obviously but I like his face The elements (not totally tidy hair, big glasses, chin that makes him look determined, and so on) are good together.
Well the face is very messy too but very impressive

[LtPlissken]

Klang is a serious business.
I can see in his eyes that he could rape a cactus from behind
without any warning. You should not put such a big responsibility and
power in the hands of the person dangerous like this one is.
Plus he has a pencil stabbed through his jacket pocket.
I have nothing to criticize my friend, cause I am afraid that if
I would be too rough on him, then he would be too rough on me,
later in the dark night. Under the pale sky.
So I will just say that I very much like Klang.
I like you Klang.
I like you Klang.
There is no place like home.
There is no place like home...

[shiNIN]

I can see in his eyes that he could rape a cactus from behind
without any warning.

Yes, yes, he looks exactly like that.
I couldn't said it that well.

{OMG Snake you are something... I can imagine you replying like this early in the morning, a second after left your nice little warm bed you may or may not shared with Mel Gibson who happened to come at late night and had nothing else to stay.}

I'm sorry Sivonja, I try not do this with your topic too often

[devastacio]

haha funny characters man. I like jack's concept but the shadow casted by the weapon makes it looks like weapon is almost touching his chest. if this is intended then no problemo!


Klang is a crazy and messy. those pure white highlights and the shirt just killing the image. i think you should refine him a bit more. but have to say its a cool concept.

Lets see some more funny guys!

[Kungfoowiz]

Jack is kind of like Duke Nukem.. lol.. the way he is standing on that pig just reminds me of him.. pretty cool! =)

[Sivonja]

Well thanks all for nice comments unfortunately i not have time to answer in details ,because i got some job in one company so i have just little time for one update

This time i will show u weapons for Project FPTD ..... Stun Gun , Assault Rifle and Glue gun.
Only Glue Gun is still not in 3d and here is 3d models of rifle and gun , i not like texture of rifle but that's easy changeable , btw models is maded i think in Blender and it's not my work, mine is only CA of them.

[shiNIN]

I don't like the rifle texture either So tly unrealistic and that brown thing is like wood.
I'm bad with firearms and they don't interest me the slightest (except I love shotguns in games. shotgun is manly. real men kill doom 1-2 beasts with shotgun alone okay except the cyberdemon, that's damn slow even with rockets. if I had made doom maps there would have been just shotgun in most of them... mmmm... erm, it's some infatuation on my part but it doesn't hurt anyone) so don't expect any serious crits from me
But that glue weapon is epic... The enbodiment of unseriousness... aka, lol.

{IDK why but your nonhuman updates where I can't provide normal crits always put me into childish mode, I can't help it *shrugs*}

[LtPlissken]

Hey-ho buddy-yo-ho-ho, very great gun/rifle design collection.
Stun gun, Assault Rifle and Glue gun, they are designed
on a very interesting way, of course nothing realistic
about these guns or no real functionality but I understand
that this is all done in a highly cartoon kind of fashion.
However, even if they are done in this style, they do not
tolerate shaky and not straight lines. Even in cartoons when
a human eye see a weapon, it automatically ask for technical
straightness and perfection. No shaky lines, cause they are
ruining a bit the whole influence. Now the good side is, that
these are only concepts and the things got pretty much great
and straight after modeling them. I know that you did not do
the 3D stuff, but I will comment it anyway. The Stun gun with
the shiny metallic material looks ok, but the assault rifle is rendered
kinda sloppy. Nothing serious, however it should go through some
other modifications also. Oh and that wooden part below, is just
a big no-no.
I am satisfied with your concept once again my friend.
Keep fighting like this. For peace and justice.

[devastacio]

hey now this is something really interesting.

I like the glue gun and i have no crits about that at all. its just spot on to me.

About the Stun Gun; those line patterns are kind of too even, try to add some interesting trinkets or anything that breaks that evenness. and add in another color other than black and silver.

I like the Assault rifle a lot other than that wooden attachment. it may look ok its its metal or plastic and colored in black.

Well those ideas are about the concept arts. Looking at the 3d models im assuming you guys trying to keep a low polygon count. all seems fine except the assault rifle. that really need some rework mate. i mean the textures and the colors in 3d model. not the CA.

Great stuff. lets see some more today

[Sivonja]

@ shiNIN yes rifle tex is realy bad , but i not made it , it made in rush and i hope will be fixed in future

@ LtPlissken thanks m8 , as i said to shiNIN texturing is not my work on that 3d models ...and lines ..when i draw those guns i not know too much about Photoshop, and when i do soemthing i spent too much time to draw lines to look like lines ...i have very bad and cheap tablet , so its hard to make free moves , so i need to draw lines and correct them , thats taking me alot time ,so i just tell fck up i not care if line is perfect , i want to draw some items not lines , with practice and new tablet will come better lines

@ devastacio thanks for comment my friend , i not like that wooden part ..it looks like u put some chunk of wood on some ultra modern rifle as i said i hope it will be changed in future.



And Finaly here is last one concept for game Project FPTD , its mob for second level which one will be in Sibir (Russia) , map is all in ice and snow and monsters is some ordinary ad characteristical Siberian animals . , also from that concept i made second promo poster for Belgrade Fair

[devastacio]

Hello there mate,

This is the best CA so far for me. i like the finish of it a lot. only downside i see is you didnt ground him and no shadow is cast. but its a minor thing anyway.

Keep up the good work mate. hey btw dont forget to do some more studies too

[shiNIN]

I know you didn't make the texture, you already told us that before

A bad cheap tablet can make so much a difference I know. Somehow, I always met people who was happy with their cheap tablet and even said one can draw with a mouse as well after some time but I need good tools. Drawing with my old little wacom was very painful, my quality and mood enhanced enormously when I bought my huge Intuous3
I wish you a bigger and better tablet soon

Those red things (what are those? they are like some mixture of guts and shiny tubes ) enhances the roundness of your wolf and makes it much more interesting anyway, nice idea. I don't like the wolf and especially its face as much as the other creatures but I don't know why.

The cow is so cute in the little picture and some people aim at it... barbaric...