XTIN: The Dragon's Dreamworld (comic)

**Jack the R** · August 26th, 2011, 08:30 AM

45 is up @ XTIN.NET. Not for kids.

Sascha Thau - Come back on Monday, the story is going to kick up a notch!

**Jack the R** · August 29th, 2011, 03:30 AM

46 is up. The first panel is gross, but there's important story development on this page.

The next page will be safe to post again.

**Jack the R** · August 30th, 2011, 04:55 AM

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The monster is not behind me. The monster is not behind me . . .

Vote incentive updated! XTIN is only 6 votes from bumping Alien Dice and Mystic Revolution!

**Jack the R** · August 31st, 2011, 12:02 AM

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Look who snuck up while Sina was busy humping Taonui's face. He wasn't so stupid after all.

**Jack the R** · September 1st, 2011, 04:02 AM

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**Jack the R** · September 2nd, 2011, 10:27 AM

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**Jack the R** · September 3rd, 2011, 10:20 PM

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Still on the front page of TWC!

#15 in scifi!

**Jack the R** · September 5th, 2011, 02:57 AM

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**Jack the R** · September 6th, 2011, 11:07 AM

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**Jack the R** · September 8th, 2011, 06:39 AM

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**Jack the R** · September 9th, 2011, 10:50 AM

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**Velocity Kendall** · September 11th, 2011, 04:55 PM

update!??? its getting really good now. youve totally won me over, i think its awesome.

**Jack the R** · September 12th, 2011, 11:46 AM

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Velocity Kendall - You're the second convert I made over the weekend - the plan must be coming together!

Sorry I can't update faster - it took 14 hours to write and draw 56. Why does it take so long?!

**Jack the R** · September 14th, 2011, 10:52 AM

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**Jack the R** · September 16th, 2011, 08:51 AM

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**Jack the R** · September 17th, 2011, 11:26 AM

**Jack the R** · September 19th, 2011, 09:07 AM

Now everyone who wondered why the comic was so gory can begin to understand. This isn't the whole story, but it's one more part of the puzzle. Sina is supposed to be the worst person of all time (Sina and the other fourth generation queens, who were just as bad). She has to top people like these - http://bit.ly/jxfZYD
I don't think she does it by much.

Yesterday I posted a link in the comments about why it's plausible for Sina to think she could beat Rau. Since most of you won't have seen it, here it is again - http://bit.ly/ooEGtM

While I'm linking, here's an article about whether art should belong to the creator or the fans, mainly dealing with Star Wars - http://bbc.in/qdw3FJ

(BTW I seriously wish people would stop linking to Tweets, or anything else behind a wall)

I released XTIN under a Creative Commons license. I haven't put any info about it here because, at this point, no one cares. IIRC the only right I reserved was the right to profit from distribution.

IMO the world has moved on and left George Lucas behind. Like a lot of old rock stars who also don't get it, he needs to be grateful he still has fans, and quit treating them like crap.

Next page, another horrible truth is revealed!

Five pages to go in issue 2!

**Maximilian S** · September 19th, 2011, 10:11 AM

This looks really good, the art is great and the story is interesting. Looking forward to more.

Max

**Jack the R** · September 21st, 2011, 03:03 PM

This page took too long, but the worst part is, it's not all that great either

I originally wrote this as one page, but I had to split it into two or three pages, so the page count for issue 2 may be as high as 67 pages. Which means there are six more pages to go, as of this page.

Well anyway now you know who the new people are. All the Queens did the same thing, and sent their clones off to the other Queens knowing what would happen to them. They still couldn't bring themselves to make anyone different from themselves.

Maximilian S - Thanks, here's the more! More more in a couple days!

**Jack the R** · September 23rd, 2011, 03:43 PM

Another page down - I merged a future page into this page, so now we're down to three more pages to go (in this chapter). Next week ends it!

**Jack the R** · September 26th, 2011, 02:27 PM

**Jack the R** · October 3rd, 2011, 12:36 AM

Dragon with piranha school for head.

**brad.houghton** · October 3rd, 2011, 01:31 AM

Man, fucking awesome, that last panel really helped clear up all the little nagging questions.

**wakethedevil** · October 4th, 2011, 02:10 AM

i voted!

**Jack the R** · October 5th, 2011, 04:50 PM

brad.houghton - The arc that covers Rau's origin will really clear things up.

wakethedevil - Thanks!

**Jack the R** · October 7th, 2011, 04:39 PM

I'm be making a clean up pass over the first volume. If there's anything you can't stand, or think is wrong, now's the time to speak up.

**Velocity Kendall** · October 7th, 2011, 10:20 PM

Rau-in-human-form's trench coat and ripped abs are at odds with the awesome coolness of the rest of the design. Thats my 2c

**Jack the R** · October 10th, 2011, 10:34 AM

Is the title too Batman? I like the awfulness of having these two ideas together, but if it sounds like a Batman reference, I may get rid of it.

I've been looking at the P.O.D. publishers, and it won't be possible to print XTIN through any of them. They're all staying kid safe. Yuck. Since XTIN wouldn't generate enough pre-orders for a regular print run, I suppose it won't be in print any time soon.

Velocity Kendall - May not get to print after all, but the trench coat is one of those things I'm not too happy with. Most of the designwork is on the simplistic side, but it helps get the pages out.

**Jack the R** · October 12th, 2011, 12:25 AM

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