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    Special Export is offline Special Export Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
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    Didn't build it high enough.

    I've only recently started putting work on here but have looked from afar for awhile. Here is my 12/21/12 piece to bring in the continued turning of the world.

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    You need something in the foreground. It feels a bit flat with so much going on in the middle-ground.

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    Hey Special Export!
    Work on your fundamentals is a very generall advice but this is the thing that will help you the most. You need to study boring stuff before you can make fun stuff. If you are interested in this kind of landscape pices get some good books about perspektive for example. There are really many mistakes in that picture that you will be able to fix with some hard work on your basics and lots of practice. Its a great move to start posting your stuff here! Good luck and a happy new year!

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