Post-apocalyptic man

[MacDuff]

A sketch I'm working on. It's just my first attempt to wacom, and my Photoshop sucks (really old and limited edition). Well ... Oh ! Just say what you think about this one ...

[Jane Radstrom]

I think the texture on the face wrap and shoulders is very nice! Especially the viewer's left shoulder, just beautiful! You've off to a great start with your wacom. However, in comparison to the clothing textures the hair falls rather flat. Check out some references for how hair grows out of the scalp around the hair line. The skin is very very pink, I would maybe open this next to one of Promethius's girls and see if you can find some median comfortable for you between your pink and his orange. I am not sure about that earlobe sticking out. The ear seems very small and the lobe catches and drags my eye to it. It might be better to make the ear bigger (longer) and hide the lobe so the ear is less distracting and better proportionally, though it is nicely rendered now. My 2c, I hope I was not too harsh.

[MacDuff]

No, no ! That's great, I enjoy of the reply. I will try to answer it as best in my work. Thanks a lot.