sketches i drew (3-3-04)

**torey** · February 25th, 2004, 09:33 PM

these are pictures i drew.
i'm trying to get better.
any critiques are welcome.
thank you.

an orc....

a troll...

a girl...

another girl...

torey

**AnarchyAo2** · February 25th, 2004, 10:40 PM

HA! You call those sketches?!

I'm so jealous...

**SeraphSword** · February 26th, 2004, 04:23 AM

I like the whole batch :thumbsup: . The first troll in particular seems like one bad customer. And I like the little guy hanging of the girl's mace. Nothing I can really crit since these are obviously professional-level sketches. If you absolutely have to have something, I'd say that the first troll should have a much larger weapon, to emphasize his power. Either that or a very small weapon like a dagger to give it a farcical effect. Please post more

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**Chaser226** · February 26th, 2004, 04:39 AM

HA! Sketches my arse! :bootyshak
Lets look at some of your color "sketches" now.

p.s great stuff.

**sodomizer** · February 26th, 2004, 09:50 AM

yes... I don't believe these are sketches... lol, if they are... why haven't you dumped your FINISHES??

lol.. good stuff man

**torey** · February 26th, 2004, 04:12 PM

thank you for your kind words.

...here is more.

**Sularia** · February 26th, 2004, 07:28 PM

Freaking awesome!

Sularia

**torey** · February 27th, 2004, 10:31 AM

girls...

bad guy

good guy

girl at 7-11

ok.

thank you for looking.

**arghmisfit** · February 27th, 2004, 02:56 PM

very nice! i love ur detail... but that last chick u posted, her feet kinda look funny

**darkautumn** · February 28th, 2004, 12:03 AM

omg! This stuff is awesome... I don't know what you mean by sketches... but anyhoo... I would like to see what your finished pieces look like.

**andres_pad** · February 28th, 2004, 07:05 PM

this stuff isd absolutely awesome. i reall like your style
it is confident, bold yet still exploring somehow. very nice indeed!

one critiscism though, imagine how much better it could be if you coloured (or greyscaled it). it is alittle confusing to just have the lines

**hoopa** · February 29th, 2004, 02:30 AM

DUDE!, these are freakin' awesome!
Damn, wish I could 'sketch' like that.

**Luci** · February 29th, 2004, 01:04 PM

Maybe its just me, but the sword in the first toll picture looks a little off... The perseptive kinda, and the way hes holding it doesn't look very natural.

**JSChang** · February 29th, 2004, 01:40 PM

whoa, wheres this 7-11?

**slaine978** · March 2nd, 2004, 04:56 PM

The only thing that I thought I could critique is the tooth that's further away.(on the left of the drawing) on the first Orc. It looks likes it's to far from the face. Just a thought though. Your stuff is amazing. Keep up the good work.

**eugi+** · March 2nd, 2004, 05:31 PM

Originally posted by torey
girls...

bad guy

thank you for looking.

I swear shes hot heh, I like that drawing, very cool, very complete. Sketches? hah, no, if you added color, those drawings would be grand. Even without, those drawings are wicked.

**torey** · March 3rd, 2004, 03:35 PM

hello...

grandpa

uncle josh...

more to come...

**bafl1** · March 3rd, 2004, 03:56 PM

those are great line wheight everything perfect you have some problems with breatsts and feet ...but wow .... that last drawing reminds me of my mom

**Hunger_Artist** · March 3rd, 2004, 05:19 PM

ooh, I like asian girls!

these sketches all seem to represent finished thoughts with nothing left unrendered...

I think it is ok to leave things out tentatively though too! if there is an idea you have but you are unsure how to finish it, its ok to leave parts of the sketch in abstraction.

**kidcrucial** · March 4th, 2004, 09:39 AM

Need..............Color............first post pictures....

**torey** · March 4th, 2004, 08:02 PM

playing around....

**hoopa** · March 5th, 2004, 03:43 AM

eeeeewwwwwwwww

**Riley** · March 5th, 2004, 03:19 PM

~shudder~ Nice lineart though!

**frilli** · March 5th, 2004, 05:27 PM

Very nice! You should definately post some coloured.

**daniele** · March 5th, 2004, 06:40 PM

just one crit, it seems that you are avoiding to draw hands, u often hide hands or draw fists, study hands and practice on tem and bring'em at the same excellent level of your work.

Bye :chug:

**Clank** · March 6th, 2004, 07:51 PM

Those are amazing. No critiques from me.

**Oni-giri** · March 11th, 2004, 09:56 AM

DUDE!!!!!
your are the master!
you should deffiniteley get a job at blizzard entertainment!
they will hire you when they see your drawings and there are very similar to the ones drawn by the guys who work there....

**Ninja_ASSN** · March 11th, 2004, 12:38 PM

Nice stuff... great lines u have, ql technique, but anatomy isnt so good. U should work some more on that, so ur stuff will look even better.

**shadoman** · March 11th, 2004, 01:13 PM

Damn!! These are really nice, er, um sketches... you cannot call these sketches. I think that your inking skills are very refined. I agree on working on the anatomy and hands, it will make you a much stronger artist.