Mobile Armor Suit Propaganda poster

[LordVenom]

Hey guys. I'm doing this propaganda sort of poster thing for a mobile armor suit. I want to go with a comicbookish style, i don't want to render it to much but so far i don't like it how it looks. I would be very grateful for some critiques.

[Black Spot]

The composition is all over the place. Think what you want to say and what the most important focus is. A poster should be short, snappy and in your face. Is this meant to be fun, foreboding, adventure led. Priorities - map them out.

[alex_86]

I agree with Black Spot, you gotta simplify. Kids, robot, explosion, flag, tagline. Done. That's one way to do it. Pick a message, and deliver it.

cheers

[LordVenom]

I meant to do a satirical poster in the Robocop and Starship Troopers ads way, where they advocate hyper patriotism, machoism, putting dangerous equipment into childrens hands, brainwashing and so on and so forth, but i see that i have miserably failed XD

[Black Spot]

Take the robot with the three kids playing on it, have a spare arm fire to smithereens the youths from the bottom. Get one of the kids to tuck a flower onto the robot. You want total innocence with utter destruction, but you must encapsulate the whole idea with one image, not multiples.