Deimos-remus's sketchbook-would love some Critique.

[Deimos-remus]

New here.

I'm 17 and I've been drawing since I was a young kid, I love drawing, and I'm always aiming to improve my abilities.

The areas I need the most improvement on are Anatomy( I do have quite a few books on the subject, which I use a lot), color, and composition. I have a few books from Hogarth, Drawing the human head, drawing dynamic hands, dynamic figure drawing, dynamic wrinkles and drapery, dynamic light and shade, also some Loomis books(which I still need to read more of) and a small library of Inspiration on my computer and bookshelves.

I mainly like to draw character concepts, mostly in the sci-fi genre.

Artist that inspire me are: Frank Frazetta, Moebius, Tanino Liberatore, James Bama, N.C Wyeth, Norman Rockwell, Frank Cho, Adam Hughes, Bernie Wrightson, Burne Hogarth, John Buscema, Craig Mullins, Michelangelo, Katsuhiro Otomo to name some.

I'm on Deviantart, but I recognize that the place is not not good for improving, seeing as though pretty much all the comments are "That's cool" etc. But it is a good place to start and get a bit of recognition.

http://deimos-remus.deviantart.com/

you can see more of my stuff in my gallery posted above.

The Portrait is of a character that I made years ago, only revisited.

The robot is just a concept I came up with, basically a robot comprised of junk parts.

Last is a fanart of an alien race called the pfhor from Bungie's FPS, Marathon. I redesigned it a bit. Not sure if that image will be accepted here, but I thought I'd show it.

--Nathan

[Deimos-remus]

Posting some sketches.

The first is a concept for an idea for my senior portfolio. The idea is the Myth of Theseus and the Minotaur only translated into a video game. I hop do do a lot of concepts, as well as backgrounds, and even gameplay elements.

The second is another character concept of mine. Comrade Catfish.

The third is just a sketchdump, some used with observation, others just from my head. Some are fanart, so again, I'm not sure if I should post them or not.

[Deimos-remus]

1.Captain Dallas from Alien.
2. Robot concept i did some time last year, It doesn't have much contrast, but I still like the concept.

[mike butkus]

You have talent, keep up the great work!

[Traveler]

Welcome to the forum!

Don't let the lack of comments get you down. I assure you that if you keep working hard and keep posting the comments and crits will come.

[Deimos-remus]

Here's another attempt at a realistic character, Critiques are always welcome!

The character is of my creation, a character I made several years ago, but revisited and updated to look a lot different.

Smiley Guy:

[REONIN]

Woow I love the last one

[Deimos-remus]

Here's another character portrait.
If anyone's interested, the Backstories for the characters are in their respective descriptions on DA.

http://Deimos-Remus.deviantart.com/a...rait-163520618

The character is "The Bullyt" an undead German assassin.
I think i could've spent a bit more time on the jacket, I kinda rushed it at that point. Any critiques are always welcome and wanted.

[Deimos-remus]

Did a Frazetta tribute recently. It was really sad to hear that he was gone.