【Sketchbook of LAL】

**MoKhi** · December 8th, 2010, 02:21 PM

You've you really nice heavy figures here. Do you color in an overlay layer? Your color get really saturated at times. It's a cool effect and it lends a lot of focus to some areas, but it can get overpowering. I find in post 460 it's hard to look at anything because some things are so over bright.

I really like your character design and the feeling of power in the figures. Very superhero comic like, Maybe some of your gesture drawing look to pea headed. I can tell that you're trying to give them a larder than life feel, but a few of them cross the line into looking like trolls.

Your tonal work looks great, especially those busts and that doll faced girl. You do such fine brush work. I can't wait to see more from you.

Edit: Btw, thanks for stopping by my sb!

**JIEZHOU** · December 12th, 2010, 09:18 PM

HI lal ... jiayou!

**FootstepsBeckon** · December 30th, 2010, 07:42 AM

hey lal,cool stuff. Love the personality shining through in your characters,moar updates needed though dude. GET YOUR ASS IN GEAR RAGE.

Will

**LAL** · January 8th, 2011, 05:54 AM

Rotor：hey dude ,thanks you very much , I will keep up!

Sean McClain:thanks man!

Kungfoowiz:hey bro, Thanks for your encouragement!

fury03:thanks dude!

dleoblack:hey bro ,I am fine!thank you my friend!

Seraph Fawkes:Thanks for your advice my friend! I will strive to improve

Rhoades:hey my friend!When I saw the Chinese, I was very happy!thanks bro!

MoKhi:Thank you ! my brother, I will try to do more!

JIEZHOU:hey bro, zui jin ke hao ?

FootstepsBeckon:thanks man!

**LAL** · January 8th, 2011, 05:59 AM

**Mischeviouslittleelf** · January 8th, 2011, 09:39 AM

Some pretty cute colors here, such as in the last one here, but I would like to see more studies, especially on the finer points of anatomy, and also, try to lay of the layer effects and try to do things more direct.

Also, limited palettes can be a good things

-E

**fragmentedchimp** · January 20th, 2011, 10:45 AM

post apocalyptic landscapppppesss *droool*

**fudgeloaf** · January 20th, 2011, 05:20 PM

Awesome updates LAL! love the busts and its great to see you developing your figures a lot more! look forward to the next update

**Kungfoowiz** · January 21st, 2011, 04:02 AM

The dog is saying WAIT FOR MEEEEEEE!!!!!!! =))) Luull.. =)

**LAL** · February 11th, 2011, 07:05 AM

Mischeviouslittleelf：Thanks my friend！

fragmentedchimp：Thx！

fudgeloaf：hey my friend, thank you very much ,I will keep!

Kungfoowiz:Aha, hey kung,Long time no see, recently I was busy with my work,I am back~