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    motor concept

    a w.i.p. motor concept using 3ds max. pls comment. anyone can help.. thanks
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    Looks good!

    Two things however, minor as they are...

    The pedal and the handlebar/control cluster could use some building up. the pedals in particular look too plain, for a lack of a better word, like if i put weight on them, they would snap off. Also is missing the clutch and foot break, unless its an automatic =P

    The control cluster! It looks slaped on, here we have this very smooth, streamlined machine looking very modern and such... suddenly, just a bunch of dials and wires sticking out of the front, its very distracting from the space-age look of the rest of it. Perhaps putting in like a LCD screen display, or (maybe to crazy) like a holographic interface, just something 'cutting edge' to match the rest of the bike. (same thing with all the wires in the under carriage and side part, perhaps just make one or two larger, much neater cables?)

    Other than that, this thing is completely awesome, just really is just very cool!
    And maybe you want it to be all wirey and junk, its just my opinnion to make it look completely themed, which may not be what you want and feel free to ingore it XD

    Thanks for showing us your work!
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    thanks... adjustments will be made...

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    No problem, glad to help!

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    One thing for me, and it's more a logic thing. The engine pipes would burn the back of the rider's legs.
    "Everything must serve the idea. The means used to convey the idea should be the simplest and clear. Just what is required. No extra images. To me this is a universal principle of art. Saying as much as possible with a minimum of means."
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