Peter's arts

[PeterPrime]

Hi there everyone I joined today.
It's a pleasure to meet you!

I thought I'd try my luck on this site.

I hope my art isn't too crappy for this place.

So,let me show you the picture I finished recently!

[guilefine]

Hi, welcome! Next time I would think more about value organization. If you squint your eyes and look at your painting there is really only two values, black and white. Whithout a good read this makes it very hard to understand whats going on. This means, I don't know what is infront of what or what is in the background compared to what is in the foreground. Think about larger shapes and design.

[PeterPrime]

Thank you for your critique!
I'll try to remember it!

Hmmm well I haven't been active on this site for almost a year now, but I have been drawing since then to get better, so let me share one of my recent drawings this time.

I hope you like it.

[PeterPrime]

Finished...

[WyckdNick]

You've improved a heck of a lot by the looks of theis set of posts. Continue working your shading and values. Also keep atmospheric perspective in mind. You've used it on the trees in the back ground but it would also be in your middle ground as well, just to a lesser extent.