Tomb Raider Fan Art

**kakatekoyi** · October 5th, 2009, 11:49 AM

she try to hurt the croc by poking it's eye and shoot it at the back, as you can see i have no idea what to put on the background yet, comment & crits are welcome.

**Falchion** · October 5th, 2009, 05:17 PM

Firing a pistol with your hand postured like that would be...painful to say the least. And not just because of the recoil. Aside from that, it might make more sense perhaps to have her hand holding the jaws closed.

Also: Grenades aren't strapped to a belt like that. Not without a roll of rigger tape at least.

**kakatekoyi** · October 5th, 2009, 10:49 PM

Originally Posted by Falchion

Firing a pistol with your hand postured like that would be...painful to say the least. And not just because of the recoil. Aside from that, it might make more sense perhaps to have her hand holding the jaws closed.

Also: Grenades aren't strapped to a belt like that. Not without a roll of rigger tape at least.

thx for the input on the grenades, it's still in a pretty rough stage, will add in those on second revison.

**kakatekoyi** · October 7th, 2009, 12:03 PM

**Falchion** · October 7th, 2009, 12:19 PM

As an unrelated note, I keep thinking that's Revy...

**kakatekoyi** · October 7th, 2009, 12:44 PM

Originally Posted by Falchion

As an unrelated note, I keep thinking that's Revy...

due to the anime looking face?actually i suppose to paint brunette instead of blonde, once i fix it, she will looks even more to revy, don't you think?

**saturniaus** · October 7th, 2009, 07:23 PM

I think it'd be more interesting if the croc is put in perspective like it's coming toward the viewers instead of going from right to left.
I like the girl's hair but where's the rest of her legs, it looks like they've been cut off.

**Graive** · October 7th, 2009, 07:30 PM

Originally Posted by saturniaus

I think it'd be more interesting if the croc is put in perspective like it's coming toward the viewers instead of going from right to left.
I like the girl's hair but where's the rest of her legs, it looks like they've been cut off.

That perspective idea sounds great. I think you can keep most of the image the same, and simply torque his head toward the viewer, and possibly make it a little bigger.

If you are going for a 100% tomb raider appearance, she's gotta be brunette, however I would like to see her with more of a red/brownish hue. Personal preference.