AIR BASE

[vfx.ram]

Hi,

I am trying compose Air base like star-wars inspiration.Please suggest and ideas and updates for better enhancemets.If any additional elements need to be add please help me

Comments & critics are welcome

[IMG]http://img10.imageshack.us/i/airebase.jpg

Ram.

[Truepinkas]

First I'd recommended just using the attachment manager so we can actually see the image.

[Coool Brain]

good job. good concept.

i think you still have to work a lot on your perspective lines. the sides of that air vehicle have to converge above it not below, because that's the far side. also check those shadows of people. i think they are too long. check with your light source for shadow length.

composition is okay. i think you can tilt the camera little to give some dynamism.