Just another sketchbook

**Bummer6** · August 10th, 2009, 02:46 PM

Ok, so a friend of mine convinced me to post my stuff here so I can get some honest crits on how I can improve. So tell me what you think!

**Luayne** · August 10th, 2009, 05:11 PM

They're great! I'd love to see them in a context/ some sort of environment, though

**Bummer6** · August 10th, 2009, 08:14 PM

Originally Posted by Luayne

They're great! I'd love to see them in a context/ some sort of environment, though

Thanks a lot.

I actually planned to do that and hopefully I will pretty soon. I have a much smaller ship almost finished, so it should be up by tomorrow. Thanks for the feedback!

**Bummer6** · August 11th, 2009, 07:01 AM

Here is another spaceship... Not as pleased with this one as I was with the bigger one.

**Bummer6** · December 14th, 2009, 05:40 AM

Ok, so here is a much needed update. Enjoy!

**Bummer6** · December 15th, 2009, 08:15 AM

new painting

**Bummer6** · December 15th, 2009, 06:13 PM

Anatomy study mainly focused on the torso.

**DTP** · December 15th, 2009, 07:15 PM

cheers for the SB comment

im digging your character in the suit there, only crit would be the face looks abit off compared to the rest of the body. the spaceship is nice (Y)

**RichKid** · December 16th, 2009, 02:16 PM

muscle dude needs a clavical, and pay attention to the rib cage at the bottom

**Bummer6** · December 16th, 2009, 02:25 PM

Chompers! A quick doodle today... probably 20 minutes.

**Bummer6** · December 17th, 2009, 06:52 PM

Tried making my own TF2 class.

This one took about 2 hours.

**neovirtu** · December 17th, 2009, 07:26 PM

I think if you put your spaceship in a surrounding it would look much better, then you can get your shades right, using reflective colour etc...

Also, close attention to detail, have you tried using references - like industrial images - you can use these to inspire parts/patterns onto your ships~!

**Bummer6** · December 17th, 2009, 07:49 PM

I've left the spaceship behind me, got lots of new projects. Thanks for stopping by.

I wonder what I'll make tomorrow... To anyone reading this; ideas are always welcome.

**neovirtu** · December 17th, 2009, 07:53 PM

Originally Posted by Bummer6

I've left the spaceship behind me, got lots of new projects. Thanks for stopping by.

I wonder what I'll make tomorrow... To anyone reading this; ideas are always welcome.

You should design a character, your bald guy, the paint strokes and values are nice, and stick to greyscale~~~

Good luck!

**Kevin_McDowell** · December 18th, 2009, 12:07 AM

Hey Bummer6,

Thank you for visiting my sketchbook!

**Bummer6** · December 18th, 2009, 06:51 AM

Just noticed something... None of my characters have hair except the TF2 character... and even he doesn't have a whole lot. XD

**Bummer6** · December 21st, 2009, 11:38 AM

here's a new character... I'm not really happy with the face... Also, this one will have hair eventually. Suggestions, paintovers, crits, all are very welcome.

**Zirngibism** · December 21st, 2009, 11:23 PM

You've got a good start here. My favorite is the ship on the first post.

I'd recommend trying out more color variation in your concept work. You understand light and dark, but have applied these variations in value to the same color.

Keep it up!

**Bummer6** · December 22nd, 2009, 07:02 PM

Thank you so much, it means a lot to crits from someone as talented as yourself.

Also... your avatar scares the living shit out of me.

**Pigeonkill** · December 28th, 2009, 12:12 AM

http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1260991512

Remind me of this movie with these mouth monster in the desert that chomp down on vibration they hear.

http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1261413476

His face looks like a tough guy. Doesn't seem very happy. The guy is huge like basketball player.

**Bummer6** · January 6th, 2010, 09:14 AM

Been working on a few spaceship concepts. I'd really like some crits on this one cause I think it looks pretty decent.

**Bummer6** · January 6th, 2010, 05:01 PM

So I worked some more on the spaceship and this is what came out of it. Once again, crits are very welcome!

**poetry man** · January 6th, 2010, 09:32 PM

I think on the anatomy study his right arm should be inverted. you know, closer to his shoulder. I understand the pose, but I think it would make more sense in that way. I like the first spaceship, but as someone suggested, you should put those things in some envrionment to give it more personality and dimensionality. It's a good start. I would suggest posting sketches, and working more on your character posing.

**kingkostas** · January 7th, 2010, 06:46 AM

nice start mate.Keep studying the basics to expand your horizons.
Maybe focus a little in anatomy as a basic aspect for a lot of things
keep up

**TheButterBunny** · January 7th, 2010, 06:53 AM

hey there,

looks like you're at a pretty strong starting point.

I love your little boy cartoon it has so much personality! XD

Just keep the posts coming!

katie

**Bummer6** · January 7th, 2010, 08:03 AM

Thanks for all the feedback guys! (and girls) Someone mentioned enviornments... I'm not good at drawing them and I really don't know where to start... if someone has some pointers on how to get me started, I would love to try it.

**Bummer6** · November 6th, 2011, 12:17 PM

OK! So my last update was back in... 2007... Yikes! Anyway, here's some NEW stuff, enjoy.

**Bummer6** · March 7th, 2012, 12:06 PM

Here's some updated stuff! Hope you like it.

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