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    Newborn : The Birth of Spring - Death of Winter

    Hi all this is just about the final I want to hand in. Still a bit of tweeking here and there.

    A fresh pair of eyes and a crit is most welcome. Some beautiful work up here so far. Exciting stuff!

    "I wanted to illustrate the birth of a season. I chose the birth of spring ( which results in the death of winter) "

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    good job on the colors... so the girl who is sitting is winter...? it would little bit clearer to see that the plant is spring if you can add small touches such as a small face on one of the branches and perhaps shaping the branches to resemble arms... good luck...

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    WoW!! I love it..
    Imagination encircles the world

    Sketchbook

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    Thanks for the comments guys.

    NIRONERU : I had at first added a figure but then actually decided against it composition wise. I decided to let the hummingbird represent my version of spring, and keep the plants looking natural. But thankyou those are some good suggestions!

    ktkps : Thankyou!

    Next time Im going to try paste a WIP up. Otherwise heres a small closeup.
    cheers!


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    MeBabyMe : Thankyou! I just saw yours over at the finals thread. Nice earthy textures and concept. Best of luck!

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