Comments always wanted and needed.
I think what you're doing right now is essential. Your life drawing shows the areas in need of improvement IMO.
For instance, check the size of the hand in her lap versus the size of the face.
I think before your weaknesses had been masked because you would draw stuff you were better at. If you tackle these weaknesses I think you'll be able to bulldoze ahead and finally get past the mistakes that have held you back.
Got a few drawings here, first up is a character design, I really liked how this one turned out, I'm probably paint it pretty soon.
Second is another self portrait. I liked this a lot also, probably the best portrait I've ever done but then again I don't do many portraits.
And last but not least are two pages of weapon designs.
Something about the right side of his torso seems flat. Maybe because it's not fully rendered yet. Also the placement of the mouth seems a little off.
Nice job on the SP coloring. Kind of cartoony.
There's something unnerving about his face I'm trying to figure out... The (our) right eye's outer corner is pulled down where it's not in the left. The bottoms of ears are usually aligned with the bottom on the nose in a level portrait.Lasso that sucker and pull it down a few pixels. The lips are a bit dark for a man.
As for the armor, the design is pretty awesome but it could use some more contrast if it's supposed to be metal. MAKE IT SHINEY.
I use MSPaint.
Your character design is coming along quite nicely.
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