Bring Something Into the World - Mother Nature

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 8th, 2009, 06:38 PM

My idea is bringing life in general into the world
Crits/Feedback wanted

FINAL? need feedback!

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**JLPastecchi** · July 8th, 2009, 06:54 PM

this is beautiful, id like to see how its going to turn out

**pearlyking** · July 8th, 2009, 06:59 PM

Lovely drawing, I think I'd need to see a bit more rendering before volunteering a crit.

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 8th, 2009, 08:05 PM

Thanks

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**riotorange** · July 8th, 2009, 08:30 PM

Nice style, i agree with pearlyking i'll have to wait till more work is done.

**comixnut** · July 8th, 2009, 09:23 PM

i think this has a lot of potential, please keep going with it!

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 8th, 2009, 11:05 PM

Thanks everyone
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**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 01:14 AM

**Artboy** · July 9th, 2009, 01:27 AM

This is nice Justice. I like the feel of this, kind of reminds me of the old turn of the century artists (which I love).

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 02:27 AM

Thanks

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**The man with no name** · July 9th, 2009, 02:30 AM

wow, it's coming along really nicely

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 02:55 AM

Thanks

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**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 03:52 AM

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 04:46 AM

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 05:23 AM

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 06:47 AM

**Nickillus** · July 9th, 2009, 06:54 AM

This is going to be a vibrant and eye catching take on 'Newborn', in a really individual way Justice. Great to see. I'm a bit nervous that big fish mouth thing behind the girl is about to eat her though. Or is natural selection part of your underlying message?

And wow - just noticed how fast you are going. Do you wear a crash helmet?

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 03:28 PM

Thanks, I didn't intend that ;p
And yeah I worked non stop on the painting last night - so exhausting

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**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 03:48 PM

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 03:52 PM

**bladesofpassion** · July 9th, 2009, 04:02 PM

Hi, it is very much a colorful piece but I think it lacks a bit of depth. It is a very intriguing collage of images but the message is a bit garbled. Are the animals attracted to the wood nymph? I feel as though the jaguar should almost poof into the scene by some mystic source much as the ape in the tree did. Excellent color palette by the way! I love the line work too.

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 9th, 2009, 05:24 PM

Thanks
My idea was just to show mother nature and the plant/animal life that she is part of

**sluggert** · July 9th, 2009, 10:15 PM

i really like this
the inking and colors are amazing

**Justice Von Brandt** · July 10th, 2009, 12:13 AM

Thanks ;D

**ROBOT_TANK** · July 10th, 2009, 01:51 AM

your image looks a little flat, I think you can push the values more to create more depth. It seems a bit rushed, maybe it's just your style, not sure...I do like the line work.

**Dorkthrone** · July 10th, 2009, 04:13 AM

The draftsmanship is impeccable, but, to a certain extent, I have to agree with ROBOT_TANK. I would push the values a little more to make it seem less flat.