Newborn - Motherly Love

[DynamiteDill]

This piece is part of the CHOW tie-in Competition.
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[DynamiteDill]

When I was thinking "Newborn", motherly love came into my mind. I immediately thought of how a mother cat, takes care of her kittens. Well, I only know how to draw hot naked babes, so here is what transpired. I didn't know if I could make the CHOW deadline, so I was holding off on posting, but looks like I might be able to.
Any comments are appreciated, still have a lot of room to "massage" this one. Things I'm aiming for: Finish the tongue, make it wet. Some saliva on her. And a background.

[DynamiteDill]

Now this is starting to get filthy ...

[hala]

I think you could tone down the saliva just a tiny tiny bit, but great texture on the tongue

[Sheff]

I agree that's a nice tongue. It feels a little too magenta to me. I would shift the hue to more like a warmer red and perhaps also change the hue of the hair color so as not to have them be too similar.

[Zeke]

I agree on the tongue, and the pose is nice, but the little wing on the back doesn't make much sense to me. It's cartoonishly small, but the rest of the pic feels no way near cartoonish. The placement is also weird. It's far out on the side and a bit low. Maybe if it was a little bit obscured by the back it may work better.

[DynamiteDill]

Thanks for the comments. The saliva is pretty nasty, and here I thought I toned it down already
As for the tongue, thank you! That was more difficult than expected.
Here's my newest update, brought in the mom a little more.

[DynamiteDill]

Added a background, increased her head and hip sizes slightly ... calling this one done.

[ChenZan]

looks good, did you get my message on facebook with suggestions?

[DynamiteDill]

looks good, did you get my message on facebook with suggestions?

Yes, I did. Thanks.

[Las03]

This is so cool. Looks sexy and innocent. Got my vote. !!

[harris-ejaz]

candy-pretty.