Newborn : The pre-faint effect

[Mewn]

Hi

I'm just some guy that never posts but checks this site out every other month.
Would possibly like to try this contest thing out mayhap.

Before i really start doing something i'm just gonna throw one quick sketch that's based around my general idea of imagery i would like to produce, and i wanna ask you if you think this kind of work would belong here.

Now you may be thinking "Hell, dem ain't non birth related honkey".
What i was thinking is birth of weird feelings that you don't really know what are and can't really explain. These feelings or moods are born when you're just about to faint for example (I speak for myself), hence the name.

[Mewn]

ahemm... hate to shamelessly bump my own post but could someone give me the green or red light on this picture, because i'm also very prepared to go in a totally different direction.
I really want something to work on.

[CRHome]

i dunno but what does this have to do with newborn oO?
any description for it?

[graphicgolem]

A unique and interesting take on the idea of newborn but the problem is that the sketch does not communicate your idea of 'birth of weird feelings' to me. Your idea is good but I think you are going to have your work cut out to make a image which can convey it. Good luck and hope you can do it!

[harris-ejaz]

i guess my quibble is that the image should convey 'newborn' without any added explaination, and this doesn't seem to.

[Mewn]

thanks for the replies, now i can start working. :>

[Randis]

looking at the quick strokes i can tell you can do a lot better than that, you are just fooling around. Come one, make it happen