Hi! This is my first post and I wasn't sure if I should post this under Critique or Sketchbook. But since what I actually want is a Critique on a sketch I figured I'd try here first.
I'm doodling with my own interpretation of Dune characters. Starting with Baron Vladimir Harkonnen! (Boo! Hisss!) As I imagine him, he'd be marriage of Vileness and Luxury. Morbidly obese -to the point that he would be barely human- yet, still incredibly vain and proud......but most importantly, really, really disgusting.
Now, I have everything in place pretty much.
Bloated, drippy naked body. Decadent "suspenders."
Lines need to be cleaned up. And the hands need some reworking, I think.
But after pumping him with grossness - I think I forgot he is supposed to be a baron....the Floating Fat Man needs something more regal. Something that shows he's a nobleman. A crown, a cloak, a cape - something of a hint!
And I am stumped!