Sketchbook: vofff

[bubba]

ipad to ps

[bubba]

[The_Flying_Dutchman]

You have some cool palettes and value sets in your environments. What I would suggest is to control the light a little, there are bright hazy areas that detract from the overall image. Try to tighten up these areas and focus on keeping the highlights to a minimum area. A Highlight is only effective in relation to other, darker tones, so always use sparingly.

Perhaps try some observation painting from life, there is no better way to grasp how light bounces and behaves between surfaces.

That said, I do see a lot of potential, so keep at it. (working in black and white is also a good way to get to grips with tone before heading into the much trickier realm of colour).

Keep at it!

[bubba]

You have some cool palettes and value sets in your environments. What I would suggest is to control the light a little, there are bright hazy areas that detract from the overall image. Try to tighten up these areas and focus on keeping the highlights to a minimum area. A Highlight is only effective in relation to other, darker tones, so always use sparingly.

Perhaps try some observation painting from life, there is no better way to grasp how light bounces and behaves between surfaces.

That said, I do see a lot of potential, so keep at it. (working in black and white is also a good way to get to grips with tone before heading into the much trickier realm of colour).

Keep at it!

Thank you for the lovely advice, I really appreciate them. I do approach a lot of the nature life and try as much as possible to study the lights etc. I'll try keep your advice in mind and keep try everyday
Here are some random ipad sketches.

[bubba]

Ipad megatron tutorial
http://vofff.blogspot.se/2012/05/ipa...-tutorial.html

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ipad sketches

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[bubba]

dussins of ipad sketches, I havent been active here. My head is working at sketchclub

[Flaskpost]

fina grejor! tror det skulle göra dig gott att fokusera mer på basics ett tag, perspektiv, konstruktion och design.
skulle se till att levla upp dina redan vackra färger och valörer om de sitter på en mer solid bas imo