Running Away

**Tesla** · April 25th, 2009, 01:04 PM

Long time i didn't draw withouth pencil line o.o
I like this ^^

**Hyver** · May 9th, 2009, 08:17 PM

i like it too!

maybe a little more contrast within the figures, and a bit more attention to the edges

love the devil

**James Wolf** · May 10th, 2009, 02:42 PM

I would move the boy over to the left slightly so that he breaks the line of the fig in the back because currently the right portion has a dead orange space with nothing going on. it will also help move the eye around better. secondly i'm not really sure what those three red lines are, are they surprise lines? or are the part of the large figures outfit? just something to keep in mind,

**Tesla** · May 17th, 2009, 10:39 AM

Thx u very much for the comments

Hyver, what do you mean about edges?
James, hmm.. but i think if the "chef" is all in his back gives more expresion to the scene than if i break the line... what do you think? I didn't understand very well about the dead orange... do i cut the canvas on the left? Yes, that red lines are surprise, i have to re-do them, thx ^^

sorry for my bad english x.x