jatherips sketchbook

**Krato** · November 1st, 2009, 08:24 PM

the girl with the gun needs more of a neck

**palladium** · November 1st, 2009, 08:51 PM

Really nice sketchbook Jatherip

As others have stated, you are headed in the right direction, but you need to work on your anatomy and proportions a little more. Keep doing these studies too, they help a ton when it comes to learning color and lighting. Great work so far, and I hope I've helped in some way.

**Irrlaeufer** · November 1st, 2009, 10:34 PM

thanks!! for the comment in my sketchbook. yes yes, the values, the proportions, anatomy, still so much to learn, so much to practise...

You have some cool face studies in your sketchbook and it looks like you usually stick to the range of skin tones. try to blender some slight tones of the colors that you would use for the environment into the skin. That way the skin won't look that sterile.

I just had a look on your profile. Damn, you are talented. And yet only 17! Makes me wonder what if I had started to paint earlier. Keep it up!

**Black Spot** · November 2nd, 2009, 01:57 AM

There I was thinking you were a red-eyed demonic mummy; my illusion has been shattered. Nice SP.

**towy** · November 2nd, 2009, 02:50 AM

clean work and great concept that cool :]

**miycko** · November 2nd, 2009, 06:02 AM

great updates man

you've got so much energy. keep it up

**danlambert** · November 2nd, 2009, 04:52 PM

Hey man, your values are getting really fucking good! Especially in those goblin portraits. Your TD's are awesome, but I've already told you that, would be cool to see you take some of them further though.
The posing on your girl with the gun is great, her expression is great, and I really like the textures and details you've got in the gun and armour. Only thing letting it down, (and you already know this) is the hair. SO SORT IT OUT!! haha, would like to see more of your pencil work as well. Looking forward to our next TD.

Peace!
Dan

**kingkostas** · November 2nd, 2009, 06:09 PM

keep up working hard mate!!!

**jatherip** · November 2nd, 2009, 08:02 PM

Krato: thanks, fixed it

palladium: thanks

Irrlaeufer: thank you, although talent doesnt really exist, or i have non. i have to work

(or

)?? ^^
Black Spot: thanks

towy: thank you

miycko: thank you

danlambert: thank you, dan

yeah....da fucking hair o.O
kingkostas: thanks guy

hey guys, im just updating for the sake of update...that sucks D:

**Krato** · November 2nd, 2009, 09:31 PM

btw i saw this real life test that was done and the test showed that people with longer heads are more attractive the round head people. something to think about

**p sage** · November 3rd, 2009, 03:11 AM

What king kostas said in that small font

keep up working hard mate!!!

And then this:

That looks like a lonely chair. Nice one.

**Vatsel** · November 3rd, 2009, 12:09 PM

lovin the last one!

**jatherip** · November 3rd, 2009, 07:45 PM

Krato: intresting

im gonna think about that...have you ever thought about the fact that i could want to paint ugly people?
p sage: right, its my chair

Mark Vatsel: thanks

nothing to say, exceptfor kick my ass!!!

**kingkostas** · November 3rd, 2009, 08:21 PM

hello mate.The first study is really interesting.And if i semi-close my eyes(to produce more inbetween graduations/blendings) i get great results.
See ya

**Krato** · November 3rd, 2009, 08:26 PM

lol, interesting, well anybody can draw an ugly person, drawing a beautiful person is more difficult

eee, your understanding of how skin's temp works much be soo much better then mine :/

**jatherip** · November 4th, 2009, 07:49 PM

kingkostas: thanks, mate

Krato: it was a study o.O

**Krato** · November 4th, 2009, 08:36 PM

yea but you have done allot more skin color studies

**miycko** · November 5th, 2009, 03:46 AM

nice stuff dude

i really like this last one

**Flaskpost** · November 5th, 2009, 07:26 AM

some great things in here, i really like your colors! keep the studies up!

**jatherip** · November 5th, 2009, 08:23 PM

Krato: so doooo iitttt, toooo

miycko: i dont, but thanks :9 rendering sucks!
Flaskpost: thanks

**Krato** · November 5th, 2009, 09:04 PM

:< doing anatomy and muscles studies at the moment .. got to build the machine first before you start painting it ;P

**Lav** · November 5th, 2009, 09:36 PM

last one looks bad ass, moar!!

**Vatsel** · November 6th, 2009, 01:12 AM

Hell yeahhhhhhh

nice one ja

**miycko** · November 6th, 2009, 03:36 AM

great one dude

**kingkostas** · November 6th, 2009, 08:28 AM

This last one have very nice values.i dont have any crits because i think you just have to work it more.
Keep up

**jatherip** · November 6th, 2009, 06:55 PM

Lav: thanks

Mark Vatsel: thank you

miycko: thank you

kingkostas: thanks

**danlambert** · November 6th, 2009, 07:21 PM

You shouldn't have given up on that last one, slacker.
That refined TD is fucking sweet man, values, lighting, it's all top notch.
You better keep it up!

Peace
Dan

**Peetaer** · November 7th, 2009, 10:42 AM

oooo really like that enviro you've got going on up there!!! one thing i'd like to point out that i'm noticing: your render of a figure or character seems to reach a certain point and then you totally stop and start a new one. while that in itself is good practice (building the basics of a character) you should really go back to some of your favourites and finish them. it'll be good test of rendering abilities and knowledge. when you push yourself like that you will eventually discover more about what you know and what you need to know. so go back to some of those (which look pretty stellar, especially the dude with the red lightsaber) and keep at them. remember, a painting is never finished, only abandoned.

cheers buddy....and keep rockin!!!

**Krato** · November 7th, 2009, 10:45 AM

Originally Posted by Peetaer

oooo really like that enviro you've got going on up there!!! one thing i'd like to point out that i'm noticing: your render of a figure or character seems to reach a certain point and then you totally stop and start a new one. while that in itself is good practice (building the basics of a character) you should really go back to some of your favourites and finish them. it'll be good test of rendering abilities and knowledge. when you push yourself like that you will eventually discover more about what you know and what you need to know. so go back to some of those (which look pretty stellar, especially the dude with the red lightsaber) and keep at them. remember, a painting is never finished, only abandoned.

cheers buddy....and keep rockin!!!

AGREED hehe

**Black Spot** · November 7th, 2009, 03:06 PM

Thirded. You've got to push that little bit more each time and it'll get easier.

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