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[Frank Gressie]

verrry nice sb man! you're well on you way!
i'll subscribe to this thread+some stars

keep up the anatomy, plus i'm looking forward to this alla prima paintings of yours

frank

[GaussianRaider]

Ora delle critiche che ti faranno a pezzi e ti spezzeranno il quore! Lo sfondo bianco secondo me toglie molto al disegno, ed è un peccato (rende anche i colori più difficili da vedere/confrontare)..ti consiglio ti tenerlo su un livello separato per poi modificarlo un po' dopo oppure iniziare già direttamente con un grigiolino, che fa tutto un altro effetto imho!
Secondo me poi si è perso lo sguardo, nello sketch la ragazzina aveva uno sguardo molto interessante che andava fuoricampo, come se guardasse con la coda dell'occhio, ora si è un po' perso.
Fighissimo il giubbottino, le spillette sono un tocco di classe...gli esserini invece non mi convincono sembrano innestati, non sono molto organici, io ne aggiungerei tipo uno che si sporge da dietro una delle sue gambe o cose cosìm insomma lavorerei un po' su quelli...bravissimo, in ogni caso!
P.s.
Mi sono iscritto

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Frank Gressie: Thanks man, the paintings will take quite a while, since im just starting out with oils and paint in general
GaussianRaider: Finally someone took the time to write a long and accurate critique, i dont know how to thank you maybe i'll offer you a drink or something when you get here. I think you are right on everything, will keep your crits in mind next time i try another chow / illustration

just an unfinished color study and was thinking about the cow but this doesnt fit the requirements for this week imo

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2hr figure drawing the face is the only thing i like, 40min and 5min, some face from imagination / ong bak 2

[zimfin]

Nice work. Since we will be working together on the Team CHOW event, I thought I would check out your stuff.

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zimfin: Thanks

some study and two quick chara with proportion and anatomy issue

[Shehaub]

I never know what to say when I look at sketchbooks. I have no advice. Both your SB and AAA thread are great threads to look at.

[Brun]

Keep up with the studies, they are definitly worth it,

i will be back

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Shehaub: Thanks.
Brun: Will keep doing them! Thanks for checking my sb. If you have any crits, they would be really appreciated.

Was doodling in ps, and the idea for this started to form so i had to finish it, at least the lines, i think i'll try to do more of this since i really have no clue when it comes to drawing in ps, line weight and all that stuff. Ah and i have to do some serious drapery study .
If anyone has any crits on this i would love to hear them.

[naruwashi]

nice sketches . keep drawing MAN
www.jedqn.blogspot.com peace

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naruwashi: Thanks, and i'm not planning to stop drawing °-°

daaaaaamn im too slow
i need to study more fashion magazine and such along with more anatomy :|

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selfportrait

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:| double post

[TheGnoll]

thought i might as well stop by and comment

you're doing an excellent work regarding yours studies, definately looks like Angel is giving you an excellent foundation of anatomy and the rest, wich will pay off in your imagination drawings as well.I like the bumskee-ish characters, you should do more of those (they seem to have weird foot placement tho, both the monkey and lizard guy)
very promising work, looks like you're on the right path, no point in single crits, you're doing just fine! ^^

ciao!

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TheGnoll: Thanks for the comment

100. i think, 60 second pose from posemaniacs and tryng out an idea i have for the cow.

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little update on the cow

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selfportraits and a little update on the cow, the colors sucks

[Jonas_J]

Awesome self portraits. Really liking your sketchbook.
Im thinking about studying in Florence in a few years as well. Got any handy tips?

[Eric Gerhard]

Great portraits! Bring some colored ones!

Keep up!

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Braintree: Thanks, i dont really have any tips on living here in florence o_o
Eric Gerhard: Thanks and the colored ones will have to wait xD 'till i get the hang of it.

selfportrait cow and an unfinished char, got a bunch of anatomy study laying around but sadly i don't have a scanner here.

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Didnt like my cow so i redesigned it a bit

[TheGnoll]

good job man, cow's looking much better now!
he he i see the marko worshop really pumped you up he he

don't slow down!
ciao

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TheGnoll: Thanks, and ye marko workshop was awesome, cant believe how good and fast he is :|

chow poo

[TheGnoll]

nice start man, make sure you adjust her left leg to make it look as if it was closer to the looker, rising slightly the knee, tilting the leg just slightly and making the foot-to-knee part a bit longer.
I'd also lookout for the way this overlap each other, work out the lines in a way its clear what goes on top f what, cause that builds up depth (for example in the chest, i don't know a very narrow chest or what.
Already tired of the 6 legged horse?

ciao!

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TheGnoll: Thanks for pointing my errors out and telling me how to fix them! I'll keep your suggestion in mind next time. And yes, i'm already tired of that 6 leg thing since i didnt plan out the anatomy and the composition.

chow idea, full of errors and quick selfportrait that looks like crap

[TheGnoll]

great job on the second sketch, looks a lot better, use your time to correct the mistakes you'll see, ignore the deadline and work on this one as much as you can is my suggestion

and shut up, i wish i could do a sellfportrait like that

ciao!

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TheGnoll: i'll try if i can keep high my interest in that piece o_o, there are just so many errors...

random update with random stuff :|

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another quick selfportrait