Vehicle

[LongLongCat]

Hi CA. I am new here. I am kinda sick of furry-infested DA. So I moved here.

Trying to create a vehicle design. It's already finished but not professional. My aim is to amuse people in a serious way. Do you think it's ok to leave the lines like this? I am still learning to draw and paint better. Don't have much time to practice these days.

[Noa K]

hi and welcome!
this looks pretty good.
for me, the sketches look much better then the cleaned up version.
have to say though, i don't really get it... is it a a sausge or a penis with a face on it instead of a missile or water tank? if it's a penis, which i think it is, then don't be ashamed and just draw a penis (why o why did they remove that thread?). anyway, my point is, for a private joke its fine. but if you want us who don't know the background story, which we don't, to understand the joke, the work needs to be more communicitive, or at least u should give us a short explanation of what u want to achieve.. it would help ppl here give you a more constructive critique..
good luck!

[MiniGoth]

The Oscar Meyer truck gets a makeover - this has comic possibilities.

[subtle_squid]

I like the concept quite a lot. I think you could find a more elegant solution to the main gun than just a tank turret stuck on top of the wienermobile. Even if you want to go that rout I advise you too look at real top turrents on apcs and hummers. They are lower profile and either remotely operated from inside the vehicle or just tall enough for the gunner to stand his head and shoulders up in to the turret. I like that you gave it balls that is funny but they don't look like functional structures. Maybe you could make them look more like the external magazines that hang off the back of modern tanks. Drum magazines or fuel tanks are some other options. The vehicle in your perspective drawing in no way matches the proportions of your plan views. It is at least twice the length that the plan views indicate. Foreshortening is the hardest thing to get a feel for in perspective drawing. If you know how to you can build out the volume in cubes to figure out where the back end should be.