C&C ?...2nd may.

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Giroge: thank you for your comment. You said " but the colors are a bit disturbing " Can you explain me a bit more?

Ps: happy new year

[m.j.]

Hi there!
I think that next update will be much,much better. The last one is pretty good! I like color on her thighs...
Happy new year you too!

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Thank you for your comment mj, I hope I'll can improve to colorise my picture.

Here is a drawing, I don't know why but it's seems boring....too soft....I don't know what is the problem. Is there a lake of contrast?

[Jaro]

Wow, your figure studies are excellent mate! Your lines are really nice, loose but confident. If you're worried about the last drawing looking a little flat you could intensify some of the areas in shadow, go a little darker. Not too much though, I honestly think it looks fine the way it is.

I'll be keeping an eye on your sketchbook, keep it up!

[dessinateurimpulsif]

thanks a lot jaro...the problem I have is that I think my drawing very poor, no energy , that's true this drawing is flat but the main problem is that this drawing is very calm.....maybe must i draw quickly?.... maybe may I draw more straight lines?

Drawing alone is not very easy....
one more time thanks a lot jaro....and your sketchbook rocks.

(sorry for my poor english level )

[paperX]

good stuff man! for your rendering I suggest perhaps emphasizing the core shadows a bit more? it really helps to make the form pop

keep working hard!

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Hi paperX...here is a sketch with darker values....next time I'll try to erase outlines. So I'm reading the tut from lin ran you translated...thank you a lot for this.

[dessinateurimpulsif]

here is another sketch from photoref....I continue to search a way of working, fast with not bad colours...I think I'll try different brush

[Mischeviouslittleelf]

Work on your edges man

-E

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Thank you for your comment, do you mean this?

I've difficulties to put some volumes on it...It looks like to a lot of coloured "spots" (?). I'll spent the entire afternoon to do this...it's too long in my opinion to progress. I think I must do 4 drawing like this with same time.

[dessinateurimpulsif]

I continue to "work"...with colours.

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Hi folks, I continu to draw even if I don't post...Here is something new , it's draw on an A4 papersheet but i have the impression that texture of paper is a bit "big" for the size of the drawing. Do you think it's right, must I change the paper I use? or is there a method to have a better render?

I add 3 drawings I've done today

[dessinateurimpulsif]

I try to learn simple volumes of body. I have a better drawing with pencil than with my computer.

[m.j.]

Nice studies as always!

[dessinateurimpulsif]

mj: thank your for your comment....

[dessinateurimpulsif]

I don't know why but I like this sketch.....

[dessinateurimpulsif]

3 drawings done yesterday night...i'm quite proud of them due to faces which are "similar" to the models....

Crits are very welcome......

[dessinateurimpulsif]

[dessinateurimpulsif]

I continue to work...next time I draw a little figure to "find a way"

[phizpietl]

Hey nice stuff you have here.
I see your doing a lot of life drawing, thats very good. Have you tried doing "one-liner" gestures? This is where you put the pen down, and don't lift it off the paper until the one line you have been putting down has described the whole figure. Usually done with short poses, this can really help loosen up your gesture and increase line economy.

Keep it up
Phil Lietz
www.phillietz.com
www.phillietz.blogspot.com

[dessinateurimpulsif]

thank you a lot for this comment phil...I've never try the method you said but i'll do it.Like you can see I draw a lot of " constructions lines" I think that it will be hard to change but I'll try...
I'm looking your website and I think your drawings are greats....

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Hi continu to draw....oftenly without ref. I must draw something with stories, strong characters, monster etc....but I always do the same mistakes....I never draw any thumbnails.....

here is what i drawn recently.

[dessinateurimpulsif]

bimbidimbidam

[soros]

Very nice figure sketches - I love your style! And also some nice character ideas. Keep on posting!

[dessinateurimpulsif]

what's the matter?....Don't know...i search a way to improve.....

[Asahi-SD-]

ye tres chouette tout ca , je conaissais pas ton taf , tu passe jamais sur le cafe sale ? sinon ton grain de papier est en effet unpeu gros je trouve , a l'occasion essaye le papier des moleskine ou meme le papier imprimante , le rendu est fin et le toucher agreable en general , maisle papier ,moleskine c'est le must je trouve !!

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Asashi :

merci de ton commentaire, pour café salé, je ne passes que tres rarement dessus et ne postes pas, un peu d'apprehension, et pas trop a l'aise dans les communautés réélles ou virtuelles. Quant au grain du papier, c'est mon gros probleme et pourtant meme sur du papier imprimante j'ai la meme impression de points blancs qui bouffent les zones noires, je finis par me demander si le fait de dessiner sun bloc de papier n'amplifierait pas la taille du grain. Ceci dit, c'est vrai que le papier imprimante est plus fin que celui que j'utilise...Quant au moleskine....je vais voir si je trouve ça, je ne crois pas connaitre cette marque de papier.

merci de nouveau pour ton commentaire et je découvre ton taf qui me plait bien aussi.

[Asahi-SD-]

heu moleskine c'est pas vraiment du papier ce sont des carnets , sketchbook etc , mais de super qualite etla papier qui va avec est vraiment super , pas mal de grand artistes du crayon ne jure que par son papier quand il en vient au sketch , croquis etc... meme pour des rendu plus pousse aussi d'ailleurs

Une recheche sur google te permettra de tomber direct sur leur site , bon par contre c'est pas donne :/ mais ce sont des beaux objets aussi si tu t'applique bien dessus ca te fais un super book de dessin bien presentable et un bel objet a garder bref classe quoi ^^

sinon je sais pas ca vient peut etre de ton/tes crayon :/

[dessinateurimpulsif]

" bon par contre c'est pas donne :/ "
je viens de trouver a la fnac du coin....effectivement.....c'est pas donné....

[dessinateurimpulsif]

Here is what I done recently....I try to think to all comments everybody here gave me, draw with only one line, think lines as calligraphy...It's not easy but I try to do my best.