I've done a lot of practice digital painting before, but this picture in particular is one that I really would like some feedback on. Please let me know what you think.
JordanN
Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
I've done a lot of practice digital painting before, but this picture in particular is one that I really would like some feedback on. Please let me know what you think.
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Honest opinion good , but its too conceptional , and not organic enough. It is circular logic, and almost boring. Yet the mystery behind it , the concept makes it mildly interesting. The fact that he is in motion and that he is yet to discover what we can not see is a nice touch, and I like it . But there are no spectators, and the fantasy level is low, space is too plain and not grand enough, not exciting enough. I would enlarge space, put a few planets in there but that is just me. Dynamic lighting too. I would add more space.Originally Posted by JordanN
It looks good but the close up view, and composition just makes it appear to be sort of bland in my opinion.
Its good though. I like the colors, I can not comment on it directly because in the reply box I can not see it. Looks good but as I said blah....
Keep at it .
Just an opinion , on all of that , I am not a expert or anything I admit but I need to comment on more art work as I did in college.
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Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
Coupla things that confused me a little.
The pink stuff starts and ends pretty conveniently around the figure, making that a little bit of a tough sell. The stars just - stop. they exist on the left side, and then just stop happening, which feels a bit odd.
Where is the primary source of illumination? If it's a general ambience, would the jet packs give a harder, more intense reflection?
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