Parsakoira's updated sketchbook 2013

[~KJK~]

oh god, enhanced it a bit, seemed to be lacking some shadows

[BlackDelphin]

Your latest has a very nice effect! Very glossy, very colourful

But somehow it doesn't seem to fit in the landscape..perhaps review the perspective?

Anyway, i hope you'll do more like this~!

[zou]

hi

i'm glad to see you're improving in portraits, keep it dude !

nothing to crit

[~KJK~]

Thanks BlackD and Zou! appreciated Heres a TD from yesterday (90min), Librarian, which is also for the teen challenge (that also goes by the name the librarian)

The TD version, and way more refined one:

[Genius_Malignus]

Not bad at all! I think some colour variation on that last one could help it come more alive.

[BlackDelphin]

Ooh i really like the second one!! Because it feels like there's more to it than one meets the eye (or how one saiy it >_< ) Ahd it has a very nice mood!! I imagine seeing dust in the ray, but somehow, i get the feeling that it is snow !!

Really nice update!
It made me start something digital myself today. Again!

ps. what challenge (s) do you like the most?

[Keppo]

Hmm.. I thought that maybe i should actually give you feedback in here too for once.
I think that i saw you drawing this one yesterday
Great work as always. The dust that is floating around in the last painting is a really nice detail, i think that it gives the painting kind of.. uh.. 'timeless' mood

yup yup, i know that im basicly just licking your butt, but i promise that i will give you bit more criticism once i learn to draw decently myself. Besides, we both know my lack of knowledge in anatomy and perspectives, so maybe ill study those a bit more before i say anything else ;3

[~KJK~]

Thanks Genius Malignus and Blackdelphin for the support!

And keppo, thanks for finally visiting my SB, Im still waiting for you to make your own sketchbook one day! Youve got the potential you know

Heres my tribute for the Self portrait day, the likeness isnt 100% but itll do

[Bombur]

Good shit, man. I guess the eyes in the self portrait could use some more detail though. Keep going!

[BlackDelphin]

So basically hmm what's with this portrait day thing? :bashfull: I ask because i haven't heard of it..

That aside, i agree with Bombur, i think the eyes should have more details, or at least be less messy; i consider them very important in a portrait, and when i see you detailing the nose like you did...something just doesn't seem right to me plus is it me or youused the airbrush on the highlight of the hair?!

But dang!! I just so love the way you drew the nose, and the gentle desat shade you placed underneath.
I hope you'll make more portraits!!

[~KJK~]

Thanks Bombur and BlackD again!

An update for the librarian

[Enydimon]

That librarian scene is lookin' good. Keep on rockin'!

[Vatsel]

holy fuckkkk

ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME HARD????

[kingkostas]

This last work is really great pal.Great improvement.Also i love the light in this scene + the dust flying in the air
Keep up

[~KJK~]

Hey hey thanks Mark for the double post! excellent food to fill me SB with! And huuuge thanks for Enydimon and kingkostas as well, you keep me alive!!!



Im finished with this piece!

[RBeek]

wow man.. it turned out really nice!..
U are doing so awsome with your paintings lately..
I'm proud at you man!! :'(

[BlackDelphin]

Ooh you have finished it!!
And it looks really nice! Love the mood.

All those little highlighted details from the clothing are sweet!!
And the land i see on the globe now! It really was a nice touch.

Now to be a bit picky =p
that left hand looks off,considering the angle of the pipe and hmm..a bit large? ooh! and the folds from the pants don't seem quite right, and to many;

[~KJK~]

Whew, finally finished with this one! Almost days worth of relaxing painting! This one for school project..

Bigger version if anyone is interested: http://parsakoira.deviantart.com/art...oned-142410631

EDIT: WHAT THE HELLL!!??? Ca wont allow me to upload pictures!!!!!! well it does but the pic wont appear lol... and my SB wont bump... damn have to use an external source...

[BlackDelphin]

That is EXACTLY what happened to me tonight!! And i would upload in the browser, and i would push the preview button, but nothing would show!! And i then used photobucket and it was ok, but suddenly it appeared as an attach too, so i edited and deleted the external link.
So yeah, it's something from their behalf, not our pcs

That aside, really nice mood you created with your colours, highlight and strokes.
You have started to show a lot of details, draw a lot of lines and i really like how the plants look! And dang i love those colours!! Especially those reddish (well, actually purple) browns near the bridge.
But i think you shouldn't have made the sky so soft!! And you either make it a bit more misty in the back, and a bit to the front, or i don't know..but that prt of the drawing seems incomplete.

And thank god we can attach images again!

[RBeek]

Awsome stuff man.. really awsome stuff!!

[Vatsel]

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[Dizon]

I think this is the best piece I've seen from you! Great composition! Works great when seen as a thumbnail. Very effective indeed. Just one crit...Since the house is the focal point I would focus more on refining the rendering. And maybe add a cool sign for fun? Like maybe it's a bar or something else.

Love it, dude!

[~KJK~]

BlackDelphin
What bridge? its an old railway lol! thanks very much
rogerb
thanks man im getting better each time! see ya!
Mark Vatsel
THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANKS!
Dizon
whow, i feel flattered yeah i should do that, but i dont know, have much other projects under work!

A tree stud(y)

[BlackDelphin]

Oooh yeah!! >_< LoL!! I wrote bridge, didn't i? Your painting reminded me of a drawing, and i was thinking of it while i was writing..

Not that it's not obvious that that's a railway hahahah

And i just sooo love it when you update with nature-related paintings!!
I particularly like your trees, and especially that one from post #185; it's one of the first ones i saw in your gallery and i love it.

Just that unlike that one, this little tree here doesn't have a light source
Witch sort of makes it look unfinished..

[Enydimon]

Watching you on DA now.

Those are some wicked environments. Keep going!

[~KJK~]

Thank youuuuuuuu both!!


well hello lady! i should put a NSFW warning to my title perhaps :o

[zou]

post 468: awesome, very good one. keep doing more complex scenes, you're improving

this last post: the body is very nice. although you improved in heads, they lacking a bit of structure. Do some studies of head planes (loomis or asaro),
and some anatomy
the hair should have more volume in the right side.
his left hand (wrist) should be thinner

the tree: no need to say, it's f*****g good

keep it my cool mate

[BlackDelphin]

zou already said all that i wanted to say so...do as she says haha
i just want to end her line about the left arm..i see it as the right arm in the image, and yeah, the whole wrist-arm part over there seems to thick!!

and the part about how F*****g good you are, well yeah, but not only with trees and your heads, i think your entire invo skill went up a notch

Awaiting your next post!!
I hope it'll be tomorrow tehehe

[Genius_Malignus]

Very good enviro in post #468. I like the trasition between blue and yellow, and the mood is working. I think the sky could definitely use some more attention though. It seems a bit too 'airbrushed' atm.
the study in # 473 is nice as well, but could use some edge contrast and value attention.

[Vatsel]

dude! the values on the last one :o
the pants rock but the body is a bit flat