Parsakoira's updated sketchbook 2013

[ColorExcursion]

You got some inspiring work in here! I second Zou on the comment about doin some posemaniacs. Can never do enough of that

Keep up the good work and push push push!

If you are planning on rendering that last post anymore then I'd suggest you fix some of the blurriness to the man walking.

Love that crazy deformed bunny insect! And that hummingbird. The yellow outline was an awesome decision.

So, besides praising you, I have no critiques really

[JailHouseRock2]

Really good updates, love the colours man! No crits, just keep on doing what your doing!

Thanks for the sb visit too, appreciated!
matt

[~KJK~]

Sorry everyone for not being online for a while, my network is currently down... Heres a small concept of a knight i made yesteday

[hp]

i love the orange bits! i think you could refine the hand closest to us a tiny bit just to make it pop

[tokotewhero]

nice work man! sweet textures on that knight. tho i think you should move his back foot under his shoulder. should make him look a little more stable and authoritative

keep going man! great work!

[Vatsel]

Hell yeah man the texture on that one kicks ass!

I would define the club more, because its closer to the viewer, to suggest depth.

[RBeek]

Hey man, i think the knight looks rly good
Hope to be TDing wid yah!

[zou]

great oil, I LOVE IT !!!!! the feeling of oil enhanced you work

some suggestions if you want work it more: you would add some tonal variation in the sky (right top part) to keep the eye in the canvas
and you could one little tree in the farther side of the river as a reminder of the foreground tree.
these are some composition related suggestion, you canvas is very good

post 175: good improvement, keep working character you're developping good skills

[SMILEFACE]

REALLY DIG THE GARAGE AN THE PORTRAIT HAHA FIRE !!!!!
KeeP W/ THE GOODS!

[zou]

i figured out , the oil is old !!! but still good

[BlackDelphin]

But of course! As regular as i can
I just love seeing your art, and seeing you improve of course.

And now i really like the fresh feel i'm getting from this knight of yours! the little colourful details are really interesting~

[no87]

that knights armor design looks real nice man!

[~KJK~]

Wow thanks everyone for your comments! I dont have much time to answer to each one of you, but ill do it in the next post

Whew, got me network up working again! Hot cyborg chick in progress, this is gonna get awesome! Theres gonna be a lot more stuff there, more robotic arms assembling her, etc

[RBeek]

Newdle! long time no see/td

And.. watch out for her beeeewwbz

I bet its gonna look great in the end Keep at it man!

[Vatsel]

DUDE!
you're fucking backkkkkk!!! ajgdajshgdjasgdjagdjaghdfkhflkasdfl;ksd
hell yess


we should TD tomorrow

(on the cyborg chick what roger said + neck too long knees too high arms too short and rib cage too big ) keep going though I see the epicness already

[kingkostas]

I like very much the knight you did, except some strange whites like outlines.Very nice textures you got there.
You are becoming better and better, keep going mate

[Moosh]

That knight is killer. Lots of great texture going on in that one.

[Kan Muftić]

nice feel for the color and design, watch out for anatomy!

[~KJK~]

hp
Thanks! Ill update it in a second!
tokotewhero
Thanks, youre right, he looks a bit unstable atm
Mark Vatsel
Thank you comrade for the comments and especially for the crit about the anatomy, thanks!
rogerb
Thanks mate!
zou
Haha its okay, I dont mind if you comment on older works thanks!
Grandmassa Mr. Spect
Hey thanks man! you rock!
BlackDelphin
Im glad to be one of your "regulars" thanks
no87
Well thank you!
kingkostas
Yeah they were supposed to represent scratchy edges of the metal, but it seems like i over emphasized them thank you!
Moosh
hehe thanks
Chupacabra
Wow thanks mate! gosh your work is awesome! ill stop at yours in a minute


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2 TDs from yesterday featuring a short haired chick, and a mobile skyscraper (yeah i misunderstood the topic a little ), an update for the cyborg chick, and a reffed quick sketch of a hot lady

[RBeek]

PRRRRTTT!! AWWSOME!
U keep amazing me! beautiful stuffz man!

[DanialGlover]

This is absolutely fantastic dude, I love the textures and effects you got going on!

[BlackDelphin]

It is my pleasure, really!

And i really think that cyborg chick will turn out great. Seeing the mood so far, and the detail that starts popping up from the skin is really interesting.
Can't wait to see you update

[~KJK~]

Thank you guys (and girls )

A thunderdome and a somekind of a speeder design. Oh and an update for the cyborg chick too! its gettin better and better!

[theories]

badass stuff man! i like the robot girl concept, interesting idea and great rendering!

[RBeek]

yeah u are gettin cooler every day..
Freakin cool stuffiez keep it up maaainn!!

[hp]

i think the neck doesn't look quite right on the mechish girl, it looks a bit stiff. otherwise great stuff!

[Dizon]

YEAH! Lots of TD goodness.

Just a crit on your cybergirl. You're losing the shape of her ribcage there. It doesn't feel round.

Later, man!

[Vatsel]

Less Borderlands = More TDs = More Awesomeeee!

(not that your SB isn't awesome already, but, y'know )

[~KJK~]

a mountain environment, playing with textures, LOVE THEM. 50 minutes with this or so

[RBeek]

the sky is beautiful on this one.. you should explain this to me once XD