Parsakoira's updated sketchbook 2013

[ryan mcshane]

looking sick moof!

[~KJK~]

thanks Oren

did some fixing around her face and changed the position of her right leg

[Cyberman]

rat mouse assassin =epic", so what art school are you applying for? Cheers!

[~KJK~]

rat mouse assassin =epic", so what art school are you applying for? Cheers!

Thanks im applying for Turku academy of arts in Finland!

[RBeek]

cool composition buddy! Watch out for her right arm

im curious how its gonna look.. i guess awsome

[~KJK~]

thanks Ryanoir, Sean_Mcclain and rogier fixed some stuff and redid her face entirely, it sucked baaaaad! soon going for colors!

[oren90]

great work

[Rotor]

The boob touching dude's face is priceless.
The positioning of the eyes bug me a bit thought. This is turning out real nice, keep rocking mate!

[~KJK~]

thanks oren and rotor-man! 8D

gave it some preliminary colors!

[Andrew Sonea]

Sorry, but I can't say I'm much of a fan of the colours on this one--they seem very unnatural. Greyscale looks fantastic though. Her knees are delicious!

[~KJK~]

thanks Andrew! yes, thats why i said preliminary colors and there is nothing to be sorry about, that was a valid critique! I toned down the pinks and purples and gave it a warmer overlay color, hope it looks better now

[LtPlissken]

Hey-ho.
I just lost my connection with this book a few weeks ago,
sorry about that, and now that I saw your reply,
I remembered all this. But maaan, your updating rhythm is
just merciless. I went through, all that I missed lately, and
all that I can say is that whatever you are doing, you are
doing it right. What should I criticize, when I am on a lower
level with painting, so I guess, I will just observe your
amazing products and try to suck up all the tricks and
knowledge that I can. Drop by my sketchbook more in the
future if you wish, and share some secrets, you are always
welcome there.
Keep working hard.

[oren90]

i think her mouth is out of the center line of the rest of her face, other than that it all seem great

[Rhubix]

I like the breast focal point. Very focaly ^_^

[teapo]

pars.. you are amazing haha i can really see the changes you made to her face-- good job on that ^^ now just remove her robe....

[Lyno]

Haha love it, that expression of that guy on her right is great !! He is getting a hart attack () Good job !

[Fetsch]

sweet one parsakoire, shaping up nice. Colors looking much better already.

[NickyBeats]

ya man!! thats looking awesome so far! love the color scheme!

[~KJK~]

LtPlissken
thank you so much! i really love reading your thoughtful comments! ill be sure to drop by
oren90
thanks dude! i fixed it by shifting the nose a tad, hope it works
Rhubix
thats how i like my focal points ;3
teapo
haha, you can use your imagination for that ;D
Lyno
thanks lyno
Fetsch
thanks, glad to hear it!
NickyBeats
wow, thanks! i wasnt sure if the colors were working too well but after reading your comment i got more confident!

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Last update before showing the finished version, still got a lot to clean up and define, also needs some fixing up, especially some of the faces and some adjusting too! Also here are the finished horsemen for the ChoW, its not all as refined as i would have wanted, but i got sick tired of looking at them, so i call finished

[RBeek]

i like the horseman, and i like the new one! :o

proud of you mister! You have done so much cool stuff lately!
Keep it up buddy!

[monotony]

it's so hard to not fall behind in this sketchbook. everytime I come here you finished at least one piece and are already well on your way with the next! it's amazing-
also you're one of the VERY few artists who can go from greyscale to color with such vivid results!
and four high quality entries for this round of chow! this is getting ridiculous!
seriously love your interpretation of the horsemen!

[ryan mcshane]

meh, you coulda done better...



fucking moof

[Jansi]

Hi there!

Such a great sketchbook, I particularly love the smooth rendering you seem to be able to effortlessly achieve. It looks brilliant, I wish I could do it. Just a small remark about the big picture - the lady's teeth are anatomically problematic, or, perhaps, are too white all the way. Can't wait to see more!

Best wishes,

Ana

[ThomasM]

wooooah loads of new updates! Some seriously awesome stuff too, you are obviously working very hard. I love the horsemen above for CHOW. Actually one of my favourite bits about these last pieces is the environment of the character in the bottom left. great work with that water and reflections.

I have just one suggestion for you: be careful not to make a clear definition between breast and chest on the upper parts of the breast. The "line" between these regions fades away and perhaps it continues a little high. It gives a bit of a look of implants.

Other than that its great so keep up the hard work.

[DStraX]

wow! nice! the COW peace looks sweeet, but i think the womans hand should get more atention.
It would be a nice focus point, and it gives her more caracter

[kischi]

man what a pace, so thats the sexy piece for xmass you where talking about
like the colors, and your chow is just great. got my vote
cheers

[Myllys]

Hi

The She-demon will be awesome. I like the prominent cheek bones on those boys. Reminds me of Milo Manara's style. Also her face is waaay better now. Couple of things caught my eye though:

-Her right arm. At first looks like the forearm is going back in space. Details tell that it's coming towards us (the overlapping in joint and the orientation of the hand). Try to stress the point that it's facing us (cast shadow on the boys arm or something)
-Pit of her neck also looks a bit weird.
-And finally the ear looks a bit pasted on the hair.
Looking forward to seeing it finished!

Awesome design on the horses. Scary as hell

[WRappiii]

Love the horseman! Cant believe how much you've improved!

[kiwigarbage]

Horsemen look soooo excellent!

I have to admit...I liked the first face on the woman the best. She looks kind of bland now, is she meant to be sinister? She seems to be loving, but with horns and pointy teeth. (this is just my humble opinion). Nonetheless, it's an excellent drawing overall!

[oren90]

awasome job on the horses