Fallen's SKETCHBOOK...lil update 29.4.13

[Fallenangel]

AHHHH!!!! I'm not progressing fast enough! gotta do more studies....

here is today's stuff... two 1 hour studies...

[Creusa]

Если это не фаст инаф, то я королева Англии *о*
Для одного часа очень чотко )
Касательно летающей блондинки, я вижу что не так!!!111 Волосы! Они как будто отдельно от тела живут. С этим освещением я бы сказала, что они не могут быть такими яркими, скорее ближе к той глубине цвета, что и кожа, только оттенок другой. Вот. А кожа очень здоровская! Ну, если глаза замылилились, к старой работе всегда можно вернуться с новыми силами )) Я периодически открываю папку рисунков прошлых лет и что-то исправляю )
Надеюсь чем-то помогла о_о

[REONIN]

nice studies so far, I just think you need to make more paintings from refference to improve yourself, keep it up

[Fallenangel]

AHHHAHA I HATE MY COMPUTER TODAY!!!!!!!!!!

Creusa Spasibo
Ya na sto prozentov soglasen na shet volos pravda ya slishkom ustal borotsya s etim risunkom poetomu mozet popitausy che ni buty s nim sdelaty popoze...

shadow1687 Thank you i will

Took a lil break from drawing and painting, never knew it's gonna be so hard to produce a 10-12 pages of studies per day....anyways back to the drawing board.

Today's stuff + chow wip...

[Ludic]

Beautiful pencils as always

[Velocity Kendall]

i really like this one

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b3...0001400013.jpg

[Fallenangel]

Streaming in 10 min....

Today's live stream

[Ramalooke]

I would say that your progress is very fast ;]. About this flying chick. It's not about the skill but fully a composition issue. You should set a little different perspective, with vanishing point near lower section of the piece. Besides I bet you could even now fix this painting. Right now it looks a little to flat, there is a need to increase value range. Add some atmosphere to push this plane more to the back. Don't give up on this so easily . cheers.

[Fallenangel]

Ludic Thank you

Velocity Kendall lol really and i even didn't want to post it back then...thank you

Ramalooke Thanks mate...gotta study perspective and composition!!!...so much to do and so little time.
Maybe i"ll try to make something out of that pic after i finish this weeks chow.

Any suggestions on the chow..it supposed to be some kind of a "wolf master"... haven't decided yet to make her a guy or a gal...lol

[Fallenangel]

Was really lazy today so all i made was some progress on my comicbook strips (but ain't got a scanner to scan them now) and this chow thingy.

Actually when i thought some more about the chow's recently they seem a bit boring and i just make 'em to make my self complete a drawing in some time frame....oh well.

[Ludic]

Heeeey man, love the look of this. Thought i'd make a paintover, trying to make his pose a bit more natural. But if you are going with him looking a bit "crunched togheter" then ignore the changes. If their hard to spot, you can take it and put it over your own and then just compare them.

Take care!

[Danny_K]

do some master studies and an environment a day or even more, it will help you with colors.
good concepts mate

[Fallenangel]

Ludic Thanks for the overpaint mate

Danny_K Thanks mate i"ll try

Got back to doing tons of studies per day..yeay!!

Studies...and sketches...














comic pages progress...








value+face study....about an hour +....

[Sealegs]

Lots of good looking stuff! Keep it comin!

[n1frit]

Всетаки немного не понимаю! У тебя такой оличный и динамичный карандашный рисунок, но вот цифровой как то не дотягивает, и не соответствует тому что ты на бумаге рисуешь.
Я думаю что тебе бы пошла подобная техника: http://conceptart.org/forums/showthr...=122981&page=8
Тоесть ты рисуешь черновой скетч, потом линиями конкретизируешь форму, доводишь до ума а под слой скетча ложишь текстуру, цвет, кисти различные. Ну и в конце мелкой кистью штриховкой или заливками деталить рисунок окончательно. Когда кисть очень маленького диаметра то вообще в принцыпе можно использовать кисть самой невообразимой формы, и эффект прикольный получаеться)) Тогда ты можешь взаимодополнять работу выполняемую на бумаге с работой сделанной в цифре.
Ну и в конечно смотри сам, как тебе удобней потому что это только мое мнение) Если что извини за спам))) Keep posting!

[Fallenangel]

Sealegs Thanks i will

n1frit
Hhhh...vo pervih ya vobshe to pareny....
vo vtorih...the reason for my color work is so sucky is quite simple and you can see it if you"ll go back some pages in my SB.
For the past 5 years i was in the army and had little time to paint, whereas a sketchbook was always near me so i drew as much as i could but my painting skills hardly developed at all.
Only in the last few months i really got the time to paint every day so i'm currently trying to gain as much ground in painting as i can...that's all.

Some people already suggested me that coloring my sketches (similar to a comic coloring process) would fit me very well however i want to learnt to really paint and if at some point i will understand that i suck in it too much i"ll get back to coloring my own line works...yeap i always can do that.

Anyways enough with the excuses...back to work.
Today's 2 half sketches half studies, trying to get better with values...

[Metal Fingers]

Lots of work going on in here, love that last one! keep it up!

[Ramalooke]

You are updating so fast, that my user panel is having a hard time to catch you . I can some great stuff here. I like the perspective in your newest painting, you need to work on her arms, cuz she's having serious hands issues. Also I think that this mmm membrane (not sure how to call this) on her wings should be more pinkish, cuz it's thin material, so this strong light source should brighten here membrane.

[Marlo]

awesome sketchbook!

Just great thank you for posting

[andrespin]

Very nice updates, I really enjoy your work, there's a lot of creativity, keep it up

[dac]

Nice updates,

shows progress in a short amount of time. Is it me or the female faces don't look all the same now?

All the best,

[n1frit]

Ohh man! Im really sorry ((( I very much not the attentive.I have corrected the post. Sorry for this again(

[JoeS]

your pencils are beautiful O__O ,and nice progress!

[Rustveld]

Your comic is really coming along nicely!
Nice perspective on the last study, the right arm looks a bit weird though, too small and skinny.
Keep it up!

[FUSHANDCHUPS]

Got some interesting perspectives going on in those last pieces. I like it.

[Fallenangel]

Streaming in about 10 min...see you there...

Avril's stream

[Nibras]

Oh wow, great work fallen angel. Funny how the first image I saw was of a girl falling out of the sky. Really enjoying the work in your sketchbook and I'll be keeping an eye out for it. Don't really have any critiques right now but I'll try to next time

[Fallenangel]

Metal Fingers Thank you i will.

Ramalooke hhh..yeah i'm trying to update every two days or so, i agree about the wings too, i just was too afraid to put some more color on them

Marlo Thank you

dac Thank you, yeah i tried to work on my faces drawing skills hope it pays off :d

n1frit Da ladno ne problema i ne obyazatelno bilo delaty edit, spasibo za commenty

JoeS Thank you

andrespin Thanks

Rustveld Thanks mate i know the hands look weird i spent maybe 5 sec on them...but you right gotta at least make them look correct next time.

FUSHANDCHUPS Thank you

Nibras Thank you

Today's update trying to work on some fluid lines and figured out that although my crappy sketchbook paper is not pencil friendly it deals with ink very well so... ink pen it is.
Doodles for fun gestures and futile tries to make my works more clean.


















watched some old Todd Mcfarlen video where he used that technique to make his figures more dynamic...just draw few lines and try to squeeze in there the human figure.


lil update on the penciled pages:




two studies one from live stream that i only now realize that didn't work and another 30-40 min study.

[Steveland]

The girl reminds me of avril lavine

The barbarian dude - something seems a bit odd with the separation between lower pec and upper abs, seems like he's almost sucking it in. Just my look on it , not necessarily wrong, just a bit off in my opinion.

Otherwise great work.

[Nele Klumpe]

haha, sweet, you did a avril study as well!
Nice work on making her recognisable without rendering every little detail. keep it up