I think the hardest thing about the piece on the last page concerning the composition is the square format. It would help if you stretched out the image into more of a widescreen format. (For example: Extending the left side so that you can show what they're looking at) Just a suggestion though because I find square formats a bit harder to work with.
Keep it up! Especially the badass comic pencils![]()




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Watch that arm and hand though, something about it looks a bit off to me.
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