New Comic(untitled) updated

[bhanu]

Hey guys,
This is my second post here at FF Section..
Well like the title said its a comic That is yet to be titled..
And I am doing it one page at a time, without any prior plot or script...
I will try to finish one page in two days..
First one took about one whole day...
Will Keep posting the next pages as I keep finishing them...

The medium is
pencils, watercolor and acrylics

C & C are more than welcome

Thanks much for looking...
Take care

[MattGamer]

I don't get the last phrase. The colors are
threatening to me and really bright for such
a horrorifying panel. Maybe darker, but I'm
not sure what you are trying to deplict here.

Keep the art going, sir!

[bhanu]

Heres the second page almost ..done,
Without letters...

[super skoda]

I really like the style you got going. The colors remind me a little bit of Mexican Day of the Dead colors and a little bit of some early 80s Heavy Metal magazine stuff. If anything the colors make the the pages more creepy and aggressive.

On the first page, the font Choice is kind of suspect. It doesn't have a symbiotic relationship with your paints, instead it kind of fighting beautiful looseness of the art. Also the panel placement is kind of strange. There are three panels but the only take-up a little more than a 3rd of the page.

The composition of the second page is freaking awesome! I hope that as you place your word balloons and stuff that you are considering how they will effect the composition of the whole page and how they will lead the eye.

Check this out: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=77013
I have to read this thing every six months because it is super awesome.