It's sketchin' time.

[FadeThen]

Alrighty then- critique time, ladies and gents! DeviantArt isn't doing it for me, I really need some help on my anatomy. Let 'er rip!

First up, some older submissions until I can draw and scan in some new ones.









I really don't know what I'm doing wrong on these, so critiques and redlines are appreciated. More to be posted soon.

[Fyzion]

on the second one, her leg looks broken..

the skull on the other hand looks pretty good. what media did you use? *likes it*

tiger person looks good, but the foot in the back looks too small.

for the last one, i'm not good with perspective, so i'll just shush ^^;

[Ash888]

Because I agree with him on the first part, I will fill in where Fyzion left off.
In the last piece we can start with the arm:
because the breast overlaps the arm we will say that it is at her side,
if that is true than either the upper arm is too short or the fore arm is too long.
For the breasts and nose try to use tone instead of line.
There is an absence of shading in the body.
Reexamine the eye on the left it looks too large and at the wrong position.
The hair is a little confusing due to the major difference from right to left, looks as if you were trying two different methods.
That would be a good place to start.
I like the tiger concept a lot, nice pose good anatomy.

[Fyzion]

wow... that's pretty good

btw, i'm a girl XD

[FadeThen]

Thanks guys! I'll keep that in mind for next time. Also, on the skull, it's a drawing with a simple watercolor wash.