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    Portrait WIP- Vague



    i know, i know. bad quality photo of a painting im working on.

    Acrylic; about 15x22? something like that.
    tell me what you think/ should fix/ change etc.

    THANKS
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    It looks really good, I like it a lot. The only thing that's bothering me is that whilst faces aren't always perfectly symmetrical, there's a lack of symmetry in her jawline and eyebrows that bugs me. I also noticed that her lips seem a little off-centre, with one side of her lips bigger than the other. However, I think these are really tiny points and largely unnoticeable (and not worth the effort of a repaint!) Keep it up.

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    thank you!
    i knew the eyebrow and right side lip always bugged me, so i planned on fixing it already, but i didn't even notice the jawline! Thanks, I totally would't have noticed! Helped out alot!

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