uhm.... YAY :D

[fantasyartist]

You're working hard mate. Those studies are looking good. Focus on mastering basic perspective. The lack of it is hurting your drawings right now. Keep drawin'!!!

[Dreln]

Good to see the simple skeletons you are drawing under your poses on the pages with lots of little dudes on them. This will help immensely in planning the pose and form of the character and most importantly keep anatomy in check.

Good studies man, keep it up!

No draw on graph paper though, hurts me eyes it does

[Tec]

at the moment i wouldn't focus too much on color and composition. i think you are going the right way with your studies and it's good to see that you are drawing a lot . i think the most important part about drawing is to get a feeling/understanding of shapes. composition and colors are kind of secondary, because they depend on the shapes underneath

it's cool to see, that you try a lot of different topics like environments, characters, creatures etc....that's the best way to stay interested in drawing a lot....so...keep up the hard work

[silvestri99]

Theres a lot of improvement since that first post. But I will echo what everyone else is saying...keep working on the basics and on the "boreing stuff". Drawing boxes, spheres and objects with lighting sources will only improve everything else that you are working on. When you are drawing figure studies try draw from life or reference and spend the time to try and figure out why the body does what it does and where your weight distrubution is. Keep up the Drawing!!

[Sebastian Gromann]

YEAH WE HIT PAGE 3


fantasyartist Thank u Swen (: Yes, im sure its right what u say; can u recommend a book with perspektive to me?

Dreln Thank u man. yep this was my intention (: im so sorry, ill change it ;D hope u'll come back :]

Tec

silvestri99 Thanx mate (: i think ill do so.

for today; a little comic i kinda copyd from someons sktechbook, because i felt bored in school, donno know from who, sry
and a character from imagination.

[Sebastian Gromann]

have a nice day (:

[Sebastian Gromann]

shit paper with shit perspective
-bumb-

[Madfishmonger]

Nice start! On that last one; I have a hard time with those angles too. Draw buildings in your neighborhood, they've got all kinds of angles you wouldn't expect. Your little comic made me giggle.

[Sebastian Gromann]

thanx boi. good idea (:

here r some studies of today

[Sebastian Gromann]

u ! use blanko paper !!11eleven

[algenpfleger]

yeah man you're working hard! keep it up!

[Dannelf]

Great to see how you're working hard! And from your first post till the last, you can really see improvement!
Keep at it!

[zweiDee]

zeichne bis der daumen brennt, kommt immer besser!

[Sebastian Gromann]

update.

[Sebastian Gromann]

bumb it baby ;D

[Sebastian Gromann]

a one-layer 40min doodle. + little sketch wip

[Sebastian Gromann]

i think i will do one of these doolde pages per day ;D its fun (=

[Sebastian Gromann]

what is 'outside' ? Oo

[Matsign]

Hey nice going on the environments. I suggest when you do your sketch pages. Find a reference to do along side stuff from you're head. Then you can draw from life/ref and imagination in one sitting.

Don't ever think you can't

[Sebastian Gromann]

Thank u dude (= most time im to tied to look after references XD but i changed my mind, it cant go on like this ;P

Sorry i was toooooo lazy yesterday.
But well, today i got my Hogarth's Books ;D ive got a lot to read and to study, no time to waste boy !

[Sebastian Gromann]

school till 6 o'clock -_____-

[Arrogant Thought]

Hey how's it going man. I really really feel your work, you show a lot of ambition and promise in your studies. I dunno when I look at your work I think you draw from the fingers. Things are defined but I think they lack some sharpness the comfort of the line you're expecting to get.( I dunno if that sounds right.) I also like your Conceptual creatures and characters, I see a big cartoon and game influence..am i right?

[Sebastian Gromann]

Hi friend (: thanks, things are good. Im so happy about your sweet words I think u arent right but also not realy wrong 'cause i dont play games ,or read comics ;P eh, maybe a bit, dont know
Uve nice stuff in your Sb and it really entertains me :] ill drop a comment dude (: see yah

maybe ill scan some studies later on.

[Noë]

Hiya!

you're doing nice stuff! I definitely agree with that using reference as well as the imagination is the perfect combination. To learn ánd keep the imagination awake, you can take a picture you like, draw it, and think of stuff to change it, or add to the drawing..
I think your lines and shading need some work. this is great linewise, it would be great if you could apply those kind of lines to the more organic shapes such as in figure drawings. I think this is all about confidence, and also about the right working method. For me it really helps to draw light lines first, and then when you have the general shape down, draw some smooth, unscribbly darker lines over the light ones with a softer pencil.

Oh, and you might want to take a small sketchbook, or just some plain A5 pages to school to scribble on, so the lines from the school paper isn't so distractive

Keep it up! ^^
Love
Marleen.

[Dannelf]

I like your 40min doodle! You are improving! Keep up the studies, but never stop drawing from your own imagination! Always a pleasure peeking on your updates!
DRAW man! draw!

[Sebastian Gromann]

Noë Heya, thank u sooo much for ur comment these tips will help me alot (: thats what i need !
and i bought this little sb, here r some doodles from today (=

Dannelf Great to see u again dude (: your post is making my heart jumping around nice, u like it (= sure ill never stop! go boy!

[algenpfleger]

Yo what's up buddy Still working hard I see! Awesome. Environments are looking good! Gotta reenforce what was said about drawing with the fingers, don't do that, instead, draw from the arm, feels weird in the beginning but has helped me a lot to get steadier lines. Keep it up!

[Jamie Romoser]

Keep those sketches up man.

[Eric Young]

I definatly see improvement, just keep doing whatever your doing, your on the right track. You could probably do some more anatomy sketchs, they will really help your character designs.
Your perspective stuff looks good, i'd suggest doing some landscapes / cityscapes from real life, doing those will really help you on your imaginary ones.

[Sebastian Gromann]

algenpfleger

OmertA thanx man for stopping by, for sure ill ! :]

The Original [E] yEp i think so too ;D thank u man !