Renegade89 vs Rockhart- JUDGED

[Renegade89]

Topic 7:

player 1 (Rockhart):discovers a gift
A- your plain sword your father gave you becomes a screaming golden eagleblade your oponent is burnt out of their boots.
B- in veign you throw a heavy charm at your oponent, the charm consumes their essesence and returns to you.


player 2 (Renegade89) :accidental miss
A - you notice a piece of shing loot next to your shoe, you duck to pick it up, a battle axe skims your head
B - you reflect an arrow with your oponents head as they try to tackle you.

Deadline:
Saturday night March 1st -48 hours from now.

Good luck

[Rockhart]

WIP....

[Beonarri]

That's pretty cool Rockhart!
I definitely work on the perspective on the legs, the lines used for them are pretty vertical, but the upper body lines are narrowing. And the ellipses for the boots are wrong, they should be dipping down.

Wait...can we crit in the Headhunter duels?
Well, who cares, I did it anyway.

Looks like another dark comedy piece Rockhart, keep it up!

[Rockhart]

Beonarri- I thinki it's perfectly acceptable to crit. peoples work in here. after all the whole point of this is to improve! man I wish you had posted sooner though because i already inked it! >_< oh well maybe i can fix it.....

Renegade89 you alive out there? I'd love to see a WIP...

[Rockhart]

Well I decided to only use pen for this one... and hey! I added a background!

... Wow this is my 4th duel this week! O_o after these are judged I think I'm going to take a small break...

k good luck Renegade89...

[Renegade89]

Yep im alive.Ill be posting my final soon, sorry i didnt post a wip.
Let me try to correct a few mistakes on my characters and im ready to go. I still have a few hours anyway

Nice pic,funny expression hehe.
Try to vary your lineweight some more, objects that are closer can have a ticker outline,
Also the inside lines of the body (the ones marking chest, abs, etc) could have a thiner size than the body outline. Since you choosed a more cartoony look you have more room to play around more with that.

[Renegade89]

My final, i did so much stuff wrong is funny... ill burn it later but now here it goes.




Ready for voting

[Renegade89]

bump.

Not rushing or anything, you mods are doing a great job
... just in case it wasnt seen, and since this got so far down on the list, i guess it also be more easy to find when you do the next badge of judging.

Thanks in advance for taking the time to vote.

[Rockhart]

bump!

[alti]

rockhart wins

1 renegade both need more love

2 Rockhart - definaly captures the theme with his idea

[Rockhart]

YAY! 1st win! lol great job Renegade
k i actually found some time this morning to play around with illustrator some more and this was the result...

[jklm950]

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[Rockhart]

hey i just want to say thx. for the moderators for being on top of it and deleating all of that crummy spam (especially all of that WOW crap) thanks again!