TinyBird's sketches - only critiques please, no compliments

[TinyBird]

[Ryan Provenzano]

Haha that's some crazy funny stuff TB. Really like the feel of the last one.

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[Leonor]

Really digging the comic so far! Moar!

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In this world there are vast white salt deserts that people cross with hover cruiser ship thingies (they work on magnets I guess). When there’s layer of rain water over the salt, it becomes like a mirror.

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Colours from my apartment (or well, as close as I managed to get them).
- desk drawer door
- carpet
- pitcher plant
- walls (in sunlight and shadow)
- floor
- kitchen table

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[JaneMag]

Seriously, so much awesome work in here! I really like how you sketch roughly, and still keep the sense of everything important in the sketches. And the one eyed whale in #799-802 is adorable.
EDIT: After digging even deeper into your sketchbook, I am SO following this!!

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[Candra H]

Those last figure studies are excellent. I'm seeing a lot more confidence and accuracy in them compared to previous pages. Also really like the little winged dragon boy reading the book further up. Lovely attention to detail and light there.

There's probably stuff on earlier pages that I should comment on but that Jason fan art binge you went on kind of put me off for a while, heh.

I'll try to check back more regularly because you're getting really fucking good.

[TinyBird]

Late halloweeny-thingy

[iven]

Your stuff is breathtaking, I really like the angry birds. The Nudies
are TOTAL blast too, they feel so real. Was that a real model or was
that from Photos ?!

I like the one with the giant who is liking the guy,....LOLs,........
I am drawing my ass off,........but your stuff is pushing me !

[TinyBird]

There's probably stuff on earlier pages that I should comment on but that Jason fan art binge you went on kind of put me off for a while, heh.

Ha ha, yeah I can understand, but luckily there's maybe two pages of worth of non-Jason material that I drew during CA's downtime in the previous pages!

Was that a real model or was that from Photos ?!

The fullbody model drawings are from a real model. And keep on drawing even more, until your whole arm falls off!

[James Thomas]

I'm finding your topics really random, but that can be both a good and a bad thing- great for keeping it fresh and exploring new stuff.
probably not the best for significant fundamental growth, i tend to do alot of random stuff, but i find the stuff i keep coming back to improving- maybe you should have a particular theme/subject matter you return to, and leave the other experimental stuff for break time/downtime ? You certainly do post often though, which is great!

[TinyBird]

I'm finding your topics really random, but that can be both a good and a bad thing- great for keeping it fresh and exploring new stuff.
probably not the best for significant fundamental growth, i tend to do alot of random stuff, but i find the stuff i keep coming back to improving- maybe you should have a particular theme/subject matter you return to, and leave the other experimental stuff for break time/downtime ? You certainly do post often though, which is great!

Could you elaborate a bit on that? Because you're most likely right, but I just can't see the randomness or experimentation myself since the only things I draw are animals, people and monsters (though, which does have range in design, but thematically it's all the same (I actually don't see that I'd draw enough different subjects or vary my style or medium at all) or do you mean some very specific subject, like... a horse? Or keep painting/drawing the same face over and over, like a self portrait thing?
And what break time? As in draw the same subject all the time? But what are my break times? I mean I draw all these during weekends which I kinda consider my break time (well, break from work time), or is it like draw one same thing every weekend and use the rest of the time for drawing other things?
I'm just bit confused here.

[TinyBird]

Graphic design, it's a thing I don't do.

[ja1307]

Really like those female pencil figure studies. Were they draw from life? Like how loose and gestural your lines are. You have captures so much life and rhythm from those poses with really good economical lines. I can learn a lot from those.

[TinyBird]

Really like those female pencil figure studies. Were they draw from life?

I already answered.

The fullbody model drawings are from a real model.

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[TinyBird]

Request, didn't really manage to get what I was going for.

[p sage]

Ha! Nice twist with that last sentence.

[marcello]

i like the sketches! nice lines!

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A trade

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It's for YOU!

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[Lightship69]

your cartoon strips are sublime I love them, simple as that!

The life drawing ones are very good too my mate good capture of form and not much line work or petting of the lines as BlackSpot keeps saying, nice job

all the very best to you as usual.