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    Smile the bringer of light

    a new one,
    rought scan and colouring with photoshop.
    hope you like it
    comments and critics most welcome

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    wow, really good coloring.
    i like the sword a lot

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    the hair is like one big gloop, and his face is a little generic and life-less, but other than that this is pretty good

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    if he's the "bringer of light" why not display some of his powers..... it might help increase the dynamics of the pic

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    I think you need more color on everything. The face, the armor, the light, and I agree about playing off the characters name. The face also needs more detail and color and perhaps you should not make it so lifeless. The armor, is it shiny? Why not add some dirt? Those are my suggestions.

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    thks for comments guys!!

    i've tried to fix some issue, i think it's better now
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