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    Two WIPS

    One is Little Red Riding Hood meeting the Big Bad Wolf and the other is a warlord leading his troops whilst riding a woolly mammoth. Comments and Crits appreciated.
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    Wow!

    But it loses something in color?

    In the sketch it looks eerie and spooky, the atmosphere is palpable....

    the colored one is too cheerful and has lost it's moodiness...

    I love the sketch though
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    LadyHydralisk: Thanks, I think you were right, here I tried to make it moodier
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    the wolves legs look really weird to me.
    maybe his front legs seem too small and his rear legs just seem placed wrong

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    Looking better and moodier, nicely done on that front, but I'm also a bit confused as to what is going on with his legs.

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    Thanks guys, I'm attaching the concept art for the wolf I did early to give you a better idea of what the wolf looks like. The legs are a little weird. I was trying to show that his front left leg is planted on the ground, his front right leg is planted on a root from the tree, his left arm is reaching for Red, and his right arm is placed on the tree trunk, and his back legs are off frame somewhere.
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    Ok, cool idea! I think it would look a little better though if you had some darker shading going on where the front legs meet his body

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